Aust1n (Offline)

Tar very much

Not sure what was to neg about my post??? What is it you disagreed with? And why couldn't you say that as well?

Well I like emotional music, low beat stuff, but i like tylers stuff too. I used to listen to lowkey and logic but my personal opinion is that they don't represent anything they rap about, they're just another person rapping about these inequalities and not doing anything about it. + it doesn't sound amazing either.

will get a thesaraus and yes I study Physics, chemistry, maths, further and economics currently first year of sixth form. and never thought of using the words from subjects in my rhymes, that is an awesome idea lol :P. I'll get on it my friend. :]

I don't know why I couldn't see how bad some of the lines were when I wrote them, I suppose I just wanted something down and wanted feedback, right I'll work on metaphors. And yeah, I wrote this song when I was pissed off with some people I know.

What songs do you reccomend I start destructing?
Who should I be listening to? Currently I've been listening to a lot of Tyler the creator but I used to like eminem a lot too.
Also how can I improve my vocab?
I'll start off with changing your little rap into one of mine, will wait till some emotion sparks first so it'll be at a random time.

Honest critisicm, if it sucks, tell me, if I did anything good, tell me, try rhyme it in your head to the "Yonkers" beat.

"I've got fire in my heart,
Anger on my mind
I want to punch you till you mother****ing cry
you pussies piss me off
because all you do is hate
you make my blood boil, you make me irate,
If you decide to grind with my dick
ill be sure you get hit,

Honestly whats the point of this,
Im waisting my god damn time,
this is all I do, all the mother****ing time,
I suppose this time, I'm making it rhyme,

Ok i'll tell you it right,
I've never been liked,
being controversial comes with a price,
I dont let it get to me,
I'd be mad if i did, id probably commit,
like michael jackson did

tell me what you think dont be afraid to be harsh.

Hey, you commented on my "How can I start rapping?" post and I was wondering whether I could send you some lyrics I came up with and you could give me some feedback. Would mean a lot. Thanks.

hi


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