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GSCE English- Don't get me started on...!

GCSE English
(edited 10 years ago)
Reply 1
Now the worst type of advert has to be comparing adverts

i would replace comparing with comparison

apart from that it is very good
Reply 2
Original post by the bear
Now the worst type of advert has to be comparing adverts

i would replace comparing with comparison

apart from that it is very good


Ok, yeh that sounds better, thank you :smile:
Reply 3
I did this assessment last year, mine was on my super sweet sixteen. :tongue: I agree with the bear it is very good, also I remember in mine I used an extended metaphor and I that's what got me the higher mark so you might want to incorporate that somehow. Good luck! :smile:
Reply 4
Original post by meee?
I did this assessment last year, mine was on my super sweet sixteen. :tongue: I agree with the bear it is very good, also I remember in mine I used an extended metaphor and I that's what got me the higher mark so you might want to incorporate that somehow. Good luck! :smile:


Thank you :smile: i will try and think of something for the extended metaphor :smile: thanks
Reply 5
i think this is brilliant. u should get a* for that. guess what! i am gonna copy some your work :-p. plz don't get angry otherwise i am gonna make you watch comparison adverts for 30 minute. lol
Edited OP I see..

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