make sure ypu have good high level descrption -Choo Choo! Screech! The cold foggy air, slamming and smacking my face. As I rapidly try moving forward to the train, the dull sky turns grey, the rain is pouring like an elephant, bouncing up and down, and rain drops making a flood wildly! I hear the rusty train grinding as it comes to stop. A drip was about to fall from the murky drain onto the hard ground; a dark chestnut brown puddle lay on the ground where drips had already fallen. As I stepped one step, I look under the wooden oak bench where spider webs and miniature ants marching out of a hole (which had colossal pieces of dust) Mice’s were crawling around and squeaking louder than a lions roar! Time goes past and I was getting bitter, I could feel my stinky feet numb and the plat form crumbling beneath.