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temptation, greed and pain.
Such are the things that I disdain,
Yet here they are in great succession
Each on its own, and only one connection:
Man. Man the singular connection.
The race of superiority who believes all inferior.
He can imagine, dream and create.
YET chooses to fight and demolish all made!
Progressing into further hell, re-creating
the scenes of Dante’s imaginings.
An Inferno: A creation of the greed -
The selfishness - of man is clearly seen.
To strip a boy of possession, two men feign aid,
possessions lost so that pocket moneys made.
Apprehensive of being a singular unit, that
in mobs we hide, sin committed through crimes.
People. No,children, continue to fight,
Pain suffered,injuries on every side.
For a cause that many soon forgot -
Mark Duggen, murdered by a cop.
This is where our power has lead us:
A pre-apocalypse for our very witness.
We shall witness, what we need to change;
The future, an inevitable place.