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    Hi,

    We have just studied thesis statements in class and was wondering how these would fair. The paper is a psychological essay so I wasn't sure how far I could dramatise the thesis before it became too informal or weak.

    1.In terms of evolutionary psychology and natural selection, beautiful people do deserve to be more successful because of selective genetic adaptations that signify attractiveness that also signal important aspects of mate quality such as health.

    2.No-one can deny the power of a beautiful face in evolutionary terms. From the womb to the workplace, people considered beautiful by that society will leave ugly people behind in the race for reproduction.
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