I'm doing CIE IGCSE English Literature and Language. It's not my best subject anymore...I have just deteriorated in quality...It really annoys me. Only about 2 years ago I was coming in the top 10 in the year and was told I could do better still. Now with a new teacher I have just become very poor. I do not know what to blame it on but I want to know how one should go about structuring an essay and examples of what to write in it. I have the ideas...maybe it is my style of communication or expression so I need help to work on it. I need to get my grade up to an A* which is what I am seriously aiming for.
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