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My Poem; The Gazing Sun

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    I'm new to writing poems, any tips are highly appreciated.

    The Gazing Sun

    Man will become free when gazing into the fearless sun,
    The sun which rises to the highest point with its full glory,
    And awakens the restless souls with its immense beauty,
    To fill the empty mind with vivid colours,
    And proudly conveys its magnificent wonders,
    To express the wide possibilities it has granted,
    Frees the spirit from harmful delusions.

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