[duppy]

Danse, danse ma petite
Soon we shall be discovered
Until then let us dance
In this chestnut gloom,
Out barcarolle observed
By the bright-eyed nuthatch
And the unblinking moon moth
Who seem enchanted by our hay

[zintanax]

(Original post by duppy)
Danse, danse ma petite
Soon we shall be discovered
Until then let us dance
In this chestnut gloom,
Out barcarolle observed
By the bright-eyed nuthatch
And the unblinking moon moth
Who seem enchanted by our hay

I like this poem! It's very sweet yet at the same time I feel it's pretty sombre and to bring across these two very contrasting moods like you have done, is a real skill! Well done!!