Question: Do footballers get paid too much?
It is clear footballers earn excessively too much-to earn over £100,000 is completely insane and outrageous. How can we live in a society where half the world is suffering from povery, but one person has enough money to feed a whole country?
Visualise this, Gemma is a hardworking, skillful and smart-witted junior doctor, she brings positive outcomes to our country; saving lives everyday and enhancing individuals health problems. She works from 8pm to 10am, she is a singe mother to a 10month baby,how can she not see her precious baby every night, who will care for her? Well she has to come with a solution, because she needs to work to feed her baby and earning only £800 a week is shockingly less than a footballer. What does a footballer do, please remind me? Kicking a ball around a field for 90mins. Wow. How is that helping anybody? And they earn £100,000 a week, that is staggering.
In contrary, the typical football fan may say "I've never missed a match in my life, I idolise Ronaldo, he deserves that £100,000, he has skills!". But what about a doctor? Don't think about wthat do you, remember next time your in pain, who is helping you, is it Ronaldo?
(Im not finished so yeahhh can u grade this and tell me how to improve please)