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Can someone read over my personal statement?...

... And offer any advice? I am applying for Manchester!
If you are willing to read over it and are an official TSR student guide please let me know and I will PM you.
Thanks in advance!

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Reply 1

Banana00

I seriously warn against this; someone could easily use bits of your personal statement for themselves - could you get a teacher or parent to check it?

Reply 2

Dynamic_Vicz

Original post by Clintbarton

... And offer any advice? I am applying for Manchester!
If you are willing to read over it please let me know and I will PM you.
Thanks in advance!

Err your Teachers maybe?

Reply 3

JayAhm

Original post by Clintbarton

... And offer any advice? I am applying for Manchester!
If you are willing to read over it please let me know and I will PM you.
Thanks in advance!

Don't share your PS. On the forum or by PM. Have people you know and trust look it over. Family. Teachers. They know you and will be able to help keep your personal statement PERSONAL as well.

Also: Manchester don't actually use your personal statement. They use the non-academic information form that they'll send you to fill out after your UCAS form is sent to them. Good luck :smile:

Reply 4

stirkee

people who haven't started their PS incoming

Reply 5

Sarah1778

Considering I'm already at uni, and don't really care about using other peoples' personal statements because I have no need anymore...I'd love to help you out regardless lol

Reply 6

Beska

Please don't post your personal statement on TSR (it will be flagged for plagiarism) or send it to random strangers over the internet.

Reply 7

Zakadoh

yeah you need to be careful about who you share your personal statement with. Fact. But I am a doctor who recently graduated from Manchester and I would be happy to help. PM me