This discussion is now closed.
Check out other Related discussions
- TSR Pride Month Hub 2023! 🌈🌈🌈
- TSR Virtual Pride MKIV - Fill this thread with colour! 🌈🌈🌈
- I don’t feel ok
- How to get over her sexual past?
- My exes are dating each other!
- RCSI vs Trinity Medicine (Ireland)
- what is the average age of first kiss and losing virginity
- What do I do
- TW: Weight struggles
- Dealing with post break up depression
- growing affections for a friend
- terrible anxiety in sixth form
- Med Reject
- i think i want a relationship! :/
- How to Kiss my Boyfriend? First time
- Bottling my uni exams
- Love
- Want to share some good news :)
- My nose piercing closed up and I’m upset about it
- dropping out of y13 and restarting?
How are you feeling right now? MKIV
Scroll to see replies
Original post by CheeseIsVeg
And goodbye 
CUTE! Congrats to your team, they obviously would not have won without such a good mother
Subway is so good thoMy sub was from sainsbury's XD I did 
XD aw naw 
dat sucks man
CUTE! Bacon sanwhiches aren't as good as chicken nuggets
I got a bit of chem done, gonna log off in 7 mins to finish the rest off got my test tomorrah
Good luck with your work
Ah man you have good taste
Specially the cookie
I love their cookies...
*prays*May Holy Cheesus be on your side
CUTE! Congrats to your team, they obviously would not have won without such a good mother
Subway is so good tho
My sub was from sainsbury's XD I did XD aw naw dat sucks manCUTE! Bacon sanwhiches aren't as good as chicken nuggets
I got a bit of chem done, gonna log off in 7 mins to finish the rest off
got my test tomorrahGood luck with your work
Ah man you have good taste
Specially the cookieI love their cookies...
Spoiler
*prays*May Holy Cheesus be on your side
why tyty
i had the triple choc chip heh
Original post by Matrix123
Spoiler
Original post by ForestShadow
every f****** time lol, I was brought up in nz and aus (used to have aussie accent but now just british one 
-read my about me)
why is it so surprising unknown?
and what about you then?
#asianinvasioin #asianrelations #chineseexperitise #chinesehypotheses #chineseescapees
ok got carried away
-read my about me) why is it so surprising unknown?
and what about you then? #asianinvasioin #asianrelations #chineseexperitise #chinesehypotheses #chineseescapees
ok got carried away
I don't know, I just never expected it. I guess I just think of people on TSR with their TSR personalities, and I don't really imagine anything beyond that.
My ethnic origin is Srilanka, but British born and bred. I just looked through your entire profile - took me quite a while.
I already knew about your passion for dance (hard to miss tbh ) and your love of memes, but the rest is completely new to me. 
*curls up and makes funny noise*
Original post by SassKing13
Spoiler
I feel like he's judging me for suggesting that XD
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by mariam687
why tyty
i had the triple choc chip heh
i had the triple choc chip heh
np
ooh you cheeky 
Spoiler
Original post by Matrix123
Original post by SassKing13
Just noticed the cutlery in the background
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Matrix123
Matrix. English assessment tomorrow !!! Oooo
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Habina786xx
Heyy!
Ooh good luck! Just remember what I've said and any extra tips you have an hopefully you'll do fine.
Feel free to ask me anything else too.What's the assessment on?
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Matrix123
Heyy!
Ooh good luck! Just remember what I've said and any extra tips you have an hopefully you'll do fine. Feel free to ask me anything else too.
What's the assessment on?
Posted from TSR Mobile
Ooh good luck! Just remember what I've said and any extra tips you have an hopefully you'll do fine.
Feel free to ask me anything else too.What's the assessment on?
Posted from TSR Mobile
Poem called storm on an island and the prelude.
Part of gcse aqa conflict and power x
I'm currently analysing them
Posted from TSR Mobile
Has anyone ate Go ahead cookie bites?
They actually taste really good ngl
Posted from TSR Mobile
They actually taste really good ngl
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Habina786xx
Poem called storm on an island and the prelude.
Part of gcse aqa conflict and power x
I'm currently analysing them
Posted from TSR Mobile
Part of gcse aqa conflict and power x
I'm currently analysing them
Posted from TSR Mobile
Ahh OK, literature. Good luck with that
is this your forst practice exam for poetry? That's good
(I didn't do those poems; I did relationships)
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Ayaz789
Yusss
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Matrix123
Ahh OK, literature. Good luck with that is this your forst practice exam for poetry?
That's good
(I didn't do those poems; I did relationships)
Posted from TSR Mobile
is this your forst practice exam for poetry? That's good
(I didn't do those poems; I did relationships)
Posted from TSR Mobile
Yusss. What shall I include in the conclusion?
How many paragraphs should I do?
Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Matrix123
Selling dodgy spoons
I feel like crap
Original post by Habina786xx
Yusss. What shall I include in the conclusion?
How many paragraphs should I do?
Posted from TSR Mobile
How many paragraphs should I do?
Posted from TSR Mobile
OK, well remember this is a first attempt so try not to be too harsh on yourself - the first time at English exams can be a real pain sometimes!
Have a look at the examples I gave you - they should give you the best ideas for this. I'd say a general sentence with the wording of the question.
(As I said, I haven't looked at these poemd so I don't know what they're about. If the question was: How are strong emotions presented in Storm on an Island and The Prelude?
The first few conclusive sentences could be:
Strong emotions are clearly presented in different ways in both poems. In 'Storm on an Island', the speaker...... however, in 'The Prelude', the speaker.......These differences in emotion are evident because of the [list form/language/structure features in the poems plus one or two sentences to explain] Despite this, there are some similarities between the poems. [One or two sentences with features and similarities]. To conclude, ......................... [here you just say a sentence about the overall answer tp the question (basically what your first sentence in the conclusion says)]
^I think that's it, or at least that's the rough plan of what I'd do as a conclusion. Try not to make it too long as most of the marks will be in the main section of your essay.
As for length, whatever I've said in past PMs. Tbh this is something I always struggled with. For both language and literature, my teacher generally said to try and do 5/6 points (5/6 paragraphs) so that's an aim. If you feel that's too much, don't rush the paragraphs. It's better to have a few good paragraph than lots of sloppy ones. In class I only ever really got to a maximum of 3 and got 3/4 in the actual exam I think (
tbh) so definitely focus on adding in all your paragraph sections. The aim of about 5 is there so you try to get a range of points. Posted from TSR Mobile
Original post by Matrix123
Ohh I see, and OCD always has to have its own way
(it's so inconsiderate, isn't it? 
)
I'm afraid I didn't. I don't suppose you saw an earlier post from me to z on here? Anyways, it just kept me up
I hope you slept well though Freezer!
Aww so a good day?
My day? Tired I had a maths test and was tired through that but I think it was OK 
How's your day going?
Aww glad to hear it! When I scrolled down and saw this post it just made mw smile with so much happiness!
Great to hear this
Posted from TSR Mobile
(it's so inconsiderate, isn't it? )I'm afraid I didn't. I don't suppose you saw an earlier post from me to z on here? Anyways, it just kept me up
I hope you slept well though Freezer!
Aww so a good day?
My day? Tired
I had a maths test and was tired through that but I think it was OK How's your day going?
Aww glad to hear it! When I scrolled down and saw this post it just made mw smile with so much happiness!
Great to hear this
Posted from TSR Mobile
It sure is determined to get its own way!
(Oh it sure is!
)Aww, no I didn't see it I'm afraid. What happened?
Aw I'm so sorry to hear that!
I slept well thanks! A little longer would've been nice!
Aww nooo! I'm glad that it was ok though!
My day has been ok!
Found out my next job is in a mental health building so looking forward to that! 
Aww really? That's so awesome! That's made me smile!
Related discussions
- TSR Pride Month Hub 2023! 🌈🌈🌈
- TSR Virtual Pride MKIV - Fill this thread with colour! 🌈🌈🌈
- I don’t feel ok
- How to get over her sexual past?
- My exes are dating each other!
- RCSI vs Trinity Medicine (Ireland)
- what is the average age of first kiss and losing virginity
- What do I do
- TW: Weight struggles
- Dealing with post break up depression
- growing affections for a friend
- terrible anxiety in sixth form
- Med Reject
- i think i want a relationship! :/
- How to Kiss my Boyfriend? First time
- Bottling my uni exams
- Love
- Want to share some good news :)
- My nose piercing closed up and I’m upset about it
- dropping out of y13 and restarting?
Latest
Trending
Last reply 3 days ago
If you could instantly become fluent in any foreign language which one would it be?Last reply 3 months ago
About the NCUK IFY Program for university Studies in the UKTrending
Last reply 3 days ago
If you could instantly become fluent in any foreign language which one would it be?Last reply 3 months ago
About the NCUK IFY Program for university Studies in the UK
