Need advice on wording

You can't indent - UCAS takes out all that sort of formatting I'm afraid.

And you should check the line limit, as you're more likely to reach that first

Yeah if I leave spaces between paragraphs then I'm 3 lines over the limit. Looks like I'll have to cut a few more sentences out.

One last question. I'm applying to do Mech.Engineering and have talked about how attending Maths lectures at a uni has given me experience with uni-style teaching (paraphrased). I'm looking for a line to remove, do you think this might be insignificant enough to warrant removing?

Thanks for the help

Is that on the UCAS form? Because lines in Word are longer than the UCAS form. You don't need to talk about it as being experience of uni teaching. If you can talk about how it's been interesting in relation to mech eng then talk about that instead, otherwise it's not necessary

It says that on the preview page on the UCAS website. I'm assuming that's the same format as the actual form will be, right?

I think I'm going to take that line out as it seems to be the least-relative to engineering out of everything.

Thanks again

Yes if it's in UCAS then it will fit. However, I strongly recommend that you remove/condense bits to make sure you can have whole lines between paragraphs, as it makes it a lot easier to read. I've never read a PS that can't be edited in a way to sort this out