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My masterpiece

I had a cat
It died.
I had a dog
It survived.
A had a girl
She's alive
In my basement
She's trying to hide.
I come after her
With a gun.
Soon she'll be eating
My cum.
My name is big Danny G
I am so pleased
To meet thee.
Reply 1
I had a thread
It died on its arse.
Reply 2
Crippling criticism.
Reply 3
Original post by CyclopsRock
Crippling criticism.


LOL, yes!

You sound a bit wierd.
Reply 4
I am creatively challenged, I'm trying to get across my meaning and my point.

This may be used in my trial.
Reply 5
Why can't I like my own post?
Reply 6
For what it is, it's simple and has a good structure. Not a masterpiece.

Although, it's a bit disgusting and disturbing, dontcha think?
Reply 7
Do you think maybe you should hand yourself into the police, you know, to confess something....?
You are a charming young poet, aren't you?
Reply 9
A powerful piece of poetry, definitely emotive. The use of simple language and short sentences to convey such a dramatic message adds to this effect. There is a clear persona in this poem - the bad man who abuses a girl he has locked up in his basement. It is not common for a poem such a clear narrator as in this one.

I don't know if this is a masterpiece, but this is definitely a very interesting poem.
To be honest, I like it. I think it is creative exactly.
I'm using this poem for when porn is down.
Reply 12
Original post by VeniViciVidi
I'm using this poem for when porn is down.


Does it go down sometimes then? I thought webporn was always on.

Rape fantasies aren't generally considered fun though, esp. not by decent guys I know.
Reply 13
Some people get sectioned for less.
Dude. You're going places.
*coughs*
Reply 15
They should put this on the GCSE syllabus
Reply 16
Original post by the bear
They should put this on the GCSE syllabus


We're already studying it in AS, in Criminology.

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