*MJ*'s poetry to make you feel special...
Hi TSR. 
I will be writing some poetry on request for you all and I will try to make you all feel special and loved.
I have wrote a few pieces so far and have recieved some excellent feedback.
Thank you all so far and please if you want me to do one for you then just ask. 
Here are a few of my pieces so far:
For Fallen Angel9:
Hey fallen angel,
You have changed my life,
I could feed you pakoras,
And make you my wife.
Your witty comments,
are lovely to see,
and you even take the time,
to make poems about me.
Now I will return the favour,
and some rep,
carry you to the mountains,
on the top step.
Where we will watch,
all the birds sing,
and you can play,
with my ding-a-ling.
Fallen angel and *MJ*,
are number one,
we can make love all night,
until the rise of the sun.
I love you dude,
and thanks for it all,
I know you would save me,
if I was to fall.
You are one of the best,
Members of TSR,
and you have entered my life,
like a shining star.
Oh Fallen Angel,
You aren't like the rest,
I'm not very good at poems,
I just gave it my best.
For Revolution is my Name:
Revolution may be your name,
but now you have just lost the game.
And anyone else who reads this too,
Just for you I will write in blue.
This guy is a TSR king,
One night stands or just a fling,
He has girls all over him,
Stacey, Lisa, Jade and Kim.
His posts are funny,
he's cute like a bunny,
and if I was a girl,
I would call him honey!
Thanks for making a poem for me,
and my Lugia whos aged three,
He's so happy I just showed him TSR,
and now all he wants is a Pakora!
For Ascient:
Ascient, you are a friendly mod,
and I would like to play with that rod.
A very nice person helping with PS,
I could hold you like my Nintendo DS.
You look so smart,
and you're from Palestine,
and damn baby,
you are so fine!
In your bio you state you are nice,
but I think you just are more,
out of all of the TSR members,
You would be one to score.
Overall I hope this poem,
means something to you,
you are a special human being,
who's heart is true.
You are pure and shiny,
just like gold,
and I would love to give you a hug,
when you are cold.
For Reems23:
Reems,
you are my fellow gunner,
I look at you,
and think what a stunner!
Yours post are great,
and a lot of fun,
when you are shining,
who needs the sun?
I like the way,
you appreciate everything,
it makes me think,
you would be a great king.
And royalty,
you deserve rightly,
I could take a walk,
and hold your hand tightly.
I hope you like,
this poem mate,
we can still win the Prem,
before it's too late.
We will talk about football,
on a later date,
I just have to say,
you are one hell of a mate.
For SuperStaah:
SuperStaah,
You are a stunning girl,
you light up the night,
like a diamond pearl.
I love your smile,
and everything about you,
we should be one,
because you are my boo.
You are one of the best,
on TSR,
I like your posts,
and you like my pakora.
A girl like you,
just makes me warm,
to protect you,
I would fight every storm.
Wind, rain,
and thunder,
sometimes without you,
I just seem to wonder.
Is life,
even worth it?
Then I think of you,
and think what a big git.
You are beautiful,
and very cute,
you make music,
like a magical flute.
If I had the chance,
I would make you mine,
You beauty resembles,
all through your spine.
So I ask you,
one more time,
do you love me?
And will you be mine?
For Missaphrodite:
Missaphrodite,
you are so bright,
we don't need the moon,
to light the night.
You are very pretty,
with beautiful hair,
and gorgeous skin,
which is light and fair.
I give you love,
all through the night,
you don't know me well,
but I can hold you tight.
I am one,
who can show you the way,
when you are down,
I can light up your day.
You are the type of woman,
who appears in my dream,
everytime I see your picture,
my face shows a gleam.
I hope we can be friends,
and share a mag,
such a lovely girl,
I give you a hug.
For Sweet by and by:
Sweet by and by,
you are so cute,
everytime I see you,
I think what a beaut.
I respect you,
and your Scottish pride,
everytime I see your lips,
I think you could be my bride.
I love your comments,
and your nature-filled fun,
on or off TSR,
you are the one.
You are what I describe,
as a lovely lass,
we could sit in a field,
or eat in the grass.
Music rings everytime,
I think of you,
your beauty sings,
too compliment too.
We should just dance,
together all night,
we are close people,
and would never fight.
It's been very nice talking,
and I hope you enjoyed this,
I leave you with these words,
and one final kiss.
For Chioco:
Chioco,
I love your username,
one day you will be rich,
and have lots of fame.
But before that,
I will give you a message of love,
you are shinier than gold,
and as pure as a dove.
One day you will be in paris,
will lots of money,
I will be alongside you,
and I will call you honey.
For you are sweeter,
than any cake,
just give me one opportunity,
and I will take.
It's been good talking,
and welcome to TSR,
if you like this poem,
maybe you can buy my first car!
I wish you all happiness,
and best in your career,
just carry on the way you are,
and you will success into pioneer.
For cconstant:
Mr constant,
you are coming to my home,
you have always been close to me,
whether it's Cardiff or the Millenium Dome.
I love your wishlist,
and man can you make picks,
when you a top dawg lawyer,
you will get all the chicks.
I feel good talking to you,
here on TSR,
I hope you enjoyed my poem,
your just an overall star.
I wish you the best of luck,
in your future studies,
after tonight,
we will forever be buddies.
For Cultivated:
Cultivated,
well what can I say?
If I were a girl,
then I would turn gay.
A beauteous girl,
with a fantastic figure,
everytime I look at you,
one of my legs get bigger. 
All the guys,
are after this special lady,
but she only loves me,
and I call her baby.
With elegant hair,
and a devine smile,
I look at another girl,
and she seems to be vile.
Her lips are delicate,
as the clouds are tender,
her being female,
I am the right gender.
Me and you baby,
we deserve to be together,
let's make love,
under beautiful weather.
Your face shines,
like a light so bright,
TSR is where we met,
and it was love at first sight.
So I ask you,
will you be mine?
you are the enticing princess,
who is just more than fine.
For Vander Beth:
Vander Beth,
just what a name,
Pakoras are what it's about,
they induce fame.
Oh how I hope,
I can bring you joy,
just what I get,
from my Lugia Toy.
You deserve happiness,
and I will provide it,
don't let anyone put you down,
because I will hunt that git.
I love your posts,
and your comments are witty,
you yourself,
are very pretty.
It's been nice talking,
on random threads,
I would love to take you wine tasting,
with various breads.
I wish you all the best,
in the future dear,
you will have my support,
whenever you fear.
I will look after you,
and butter your flora,
I will finish this poem,
by offering you a pakora.
For Amy1395:
Amy, Amy,
my lovely friend,
you are very special,
like a Heaven's send.
With you I share laughter,
and moments of joy,
you are a special girl,
and I am that one boy.
Your comments are witty,
and bright like petal,
to access your world,
I will bend every metal.
For me and you,
are ones to be,
your love for comedy,
is lovely to see.
For I too love it,
as I laugh at these clowns,
we shall forever be good friends,
and never bring frowns.
I bid you farewell,
and hope to talk to you soon,
carry on lighting my life,
just like the shining moon.
For Sleekchic:
Sleekchic,
you Essex girl,
I wanna take your hand,
and make your twirl. 
Your India flag,
it makes me proud,
you face is tender,
just like a cloud.
You are a funny one,
who makes me smile,
you can pull any guy,
from Adam to Kyle.
A special person,
I will remember for life,
all throughout TSR,
you could have been my wife.
I think of you well,
and at friend at the ready,
I want to give you hugs,
just like a teddy.
For you my heart,
starts to curl,
you are a special one,
that lovely girl.
I enjoyed making this poem,
with memories to share,
I could take you in my arms,
and stroke your hair.
For now I must write,
as I am low on time,
I just want to say I love you,
in my final rhyme.
For BossManSingh:
BossManSingh,
you are a King,
you are the funniest thing,
since Chandler Bing. 
I love your pictures,
and Turban too,
Sardar ji you are hilarious,
and one I would screw. 
Unfortunately,
I don't swing that way,
but just for you,
I would turn gay.
You offer me support,
and your posts are funny,
one day I will,
wear an Orange Chuni.
A friend for life,
and a pakora I feed,
I feel proud writing this one,
and it's a good deed.
High five to us Indians,
and for showing our pride,
invite me to your wedding,
so I can meet your bride.
We get along so well,
and I love you man,
but now I have to go,
as there are pakoras in my frying pan!
For MalcomNewMoney84:
MalcolmNewMoney,
why do you swear?
there are teenagers on this forum,
do you not care?
However,
I shall not pick out bad,
for making this poem,
makes me glad.
I like your posts,
because they raise my tooth,
some may be harsh,
but you tell the truth.
A proud member,
on TSR,
I would like to offer you,
a Pakora.
And join my soc,
because there is no harm,
some of your posts are wild,
just try to stay calm.
Overall,
you are a nice guy,
I'm not the best poet,
but I gave it a try.
For TheMeister:
Oh Meister, Meister,
why do you hate?
such nature of behavious,
is not in your fate.
I can tell you are pure,
as a Christian member,
you have been so good,
since your joined in October.
You like to debate,
and I like that fact,
we are friends,
and we must stay in tact.
Like you,
I want my results now,
but I see changes in you,
and I wonder how.
I see your are from Manc,
and all is well,
now please become friendly,
with that you tell.
I love talking to you,
and you make me smile,
stick with this nature,
before you stack up a pile.
For writing this,
has been a joy,
I hope we are good,
my gracious boy.
For Hibz123:
Hibz, Hibz,
how did I forget your one?
with you girl,
I could have my first son.
You have supported me well,
ever since the first day,
you are a beautiful girl,
who I could make statues from clay.
One of my favourite members,
on TSR,
without you where would I have got,
with my Pakora.
You love everything,
just as I do,
I can keep you happy,
and love you too.
I just want to give you,
a hug with care,
I could buy your presents,
and play with your hair.
Good luck in your,
GCSE exam,
you are just so cute,
like a little lamb.
It's been a pleasure talking,
and getting to know,
I love your smile,
and would dance in the snow.
For you are a person,
who deserves love a lot,
dayum girl,
you are very hot.
For now I end this poem,
and we shall talk later,
and I will always love you,
don't listen to any hater.
For lilac!!:
This is a very special one and I want to make it a surprise. 
Oh lilac, lilac,
my purple girl,
oh how I could take you,
and together twirl.
I love your posts,
and the support you give me,
I wish I was with you,
just up that tree.
We are the pakora,
kings of the universe,
loving you,
is just like a curse.
You love for monkeys,
and my love for you,
falls hand in hand,
as you are my boo.
18 years,
and a perfect star,
me and you,
will never be far.
I want to hold your hand,
and take you soon,
we can travel to Paris,
for our honeymoon.
For my love for you,
is more than just TSR,
we will have no wedding cake,
just a few thousands of pakora.
Your interests are many,
and we have Indian pride,
oh beautiful girl,
will you be my bride?
For now I must,
say to you farewells,
the next time I see you,
you will hear wedding bells.
It's been very good talking,
and we saved the world too,
just one final message,
that I love you!
For Revisinghard:
Revising hard,
Revising hard,
without you,
my life would be so scarred.
A princess girl,
who everyone should see,
has bought delight,
to TSR and me.
I love this girl,
she makes my day,
shes like the sun,
a very bright ray.
She is so pretty,
and a great support,
shes on my mind,
my only thought.
I just want to see her smile,
and hug her tight,
feed her grapes,
and pakoras all night.
She's a girl,
who is very close,
for all I think,
her love is dose.
Now I near the end,
of my rhyme,
and some say that love,
is a crime.
Well if it is,
then I have to confess my tart,
because I love you,
with all of my heart.
For Someperson:
Someperson, someperson,
who exactly are you?
it doesn't matter to me,
because I love you too.
I loved your poem,
thanks for the time,
you are a special one,
a mystical dime.
I love your pic,
and pikachu, 
but it is nothing compared,
to the beauty of you.
On TSR,
your posts are great,
and as a person,
you are a wonderful mate.
Thanks for everything,
we have been through,
everything about you is great,
from your head to your shoe.
Once again,
I must say,
thanks for your poem,
and this is how I repay.
Keep in touch,
while the future nears,
I love you girl,
but I hope this didn't bring tears.
For 35mm_:
Fight the power,
save the nation,
what we need,
is Socialism.
35mm,
you justice girl, (I think)
you fight for the world,
rather than make it twirl.
I love your honesty,
truth and passion,
you look great,
and on top of fashion.
It has been good,
talking on TSR,
just carry on as yourself,
and you will get far.
I wish you all the best,
in your life,
invite me to your wedding,
when you become a wife.
Good luck,
and save us all,
before all the banks and buildings,
literally fall.
Fight the power,
save the nation,
what we need,
is Socialism.
For Joseph90:
Joseph, Joseph,
"theres nowt 'bout me?"
you think I would forget you,
my friend from Derby.
I read your profile,
and you claim you are awesome,
I agree with this mate,
because you are the one!
You live life,
at the top rate,
if I was a girl,
you would be my date.
Football, cricket,
and F1, 
are also my interests,
well done son.
I too,
want to be PM,
but you really are,
a shiny gem.
I would love to play,
x-box with you,
but you would beat me in pro,
nil to two.
I love your confidence,
and spirit to fight,
you are a great young gentleman,
with a lot of height.
Just keep it all up,
and make us proud,
and you will have that silver lining,
just like a cloud.
For Nick_000:
Nick my man,
from the Thugz mansion,
The funniest man,
on this beautiful nation.
I love this dude,
and his comments so witty,
so classes his girls,
by the size of their titty.
Chasing a dream,
as a friendly man,
wants to win the Apprentice,
and yes he can.
He is very bright,
with a personality so great,
you like sunny days,
which nobody can hate.
If you admire somebody,
you should tell them,
that is the sole purpose,
of my poem.
A man of the future,
who will save us all,
from this mess caused by Brown,
that will make us fall.
It's been great talking,
and hope to hear from you soon,
you light up TSR,
like a silver spoon.
Keep on going,
and you will be swell,
I love you dude,
and for now farewell.
For Spacecam:
Spacecam dude,
with the very cool name,
I post on TSR,
but you have the fame.
I can tell already,
you are a very good guy,
witty intelligent PS helper,
just like Stephen Fry.
A future doctor,
who will save our lives,
if you were in the 1500s,
you would have 6 wives.
Good luck mate,
hope you get your degree,
your a good looking guy,
and would make a great GP.
You gym addicted man,
with muscles like steel,
you have great powers,
like the power to heal. 
So once again,
a friend on TSR,
this one is special,
who's on the right so far!
I will talk to you again,
and hope you are great,
so lets dance all night,
because it's in our fate. 
For Miss Mary:
Miss Mary,
a princess from 'tina,
when you enter a room,
it suddenly becomes cleaner.
You carry a sparkle,
which is a coloured rainbow,
I could dance with you,
and feed you B&J cookie dough.
A passionate girl,
who likes twilight,
I want to come and see you,
on the very next flight.
I too love Mr bean,
he gives a giggle,
we could dance all night,
just like a wiggle.
It's been good talking,
here on TSR,
I love you a lot,
even though you live so far.
For ChopinNocturne:
ChopinNocturne,
my left-handed friend,
who didn't get a poem,
but now I can mend.
So you are also,
a vampire fan,
that guy is cute,
and also a true man.
Britains Got Talent,
we both enjoy,
I like Simon's comments,
imagine he saw my Lugia toy.
Now heres where I can tell,
you are true from the heart,
you are a Christian member,
which is a very good start.
I say well done,
and hope you stay pure,
ofcourse you will,
as to save the world this is the cure.
You yourself,
are lovely to talk,
I hope we could dance,
and go for a walk.
I love your face,
on a beautiful night,
me and you together,
we just never fight.
So now I must end,
this poem with a bang,
I love you girl,
and welcome to the poem gang!
For So.simple:
So.simple the first time we met,
you took my heart,
it was love at first sight,
and this was just the start. 
You are such a charmer,
with all of your posts,
I could dig into you,
like my Sunday roast. 
Such a gorgeous, delightful,
and enchanting girl,
you are the person,
who completes my world. 
I would just love to,
hold you in my arms,
feed you pakoras,
with all my charms. 
You are such a girl,
who's hand I wish to take,
we could dance all night,
alongside the lake. 
Cook you chilli paneer,
and make it a surprise,
you are the girl,
who is my star prize. 
I just want to,
see your smiles,
just to see you,
I would travel a thousand miles. 
It's been so good,
talking to you,
I remember every moment,
because I love you boo. 
So now as I,
come to the end,
my heart is broken,
but only you can mend. 
I will end this poem,
and give you one last kiss,
with one final message,
I love you miss!
Hope you liked it. 
I hope you all enjoyed them.
Last edited by *MJ* : 11-08-2009 at 23:10.
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