[inwonderland32]

(Original post by moomin_love)
If you want I can send you an example of an essay I wrote of AQA A2 psychology that my teacher graded as an A*? I don't know how to explain it... but she says to use loads of connectives like "however" and stuff to show the examiner that you are showing both sides of the argument.

heyy i've got the same problem too
would you mind sending it to me aswell ????

[CollateralElement]

(Original post by moomin_love)
If you want I can send you an example of an essay I wrote of AQA A2 psychology that my teacher graded as an A*? I don't know how to explain it... but she says to use loads of connectives like "however" and stuff to show the examiner that you are showing both sides of the argument.

Hey. Please, can you send me those essays? you'd save a life here! Please????!

I'm doing Perception
Aggression
Biological Rhythms and Sleep Thank you xx

[moomin_love]

(Original post by CollateralElement)
Hey. Please, can you send me those essays? you'd save a life here! Please????!

I'm doing Perception
Aggression
Biological Rhythms and Sleep Thank you xx

Hi, sorry I did A levels like 2 years ago and my laptop from back then broke ages ago and so I have a new laptop with none of my a level work on it. Sorry I can't be much more help! I got an A not from practising writing essays, but from just reading the textbook over and over again and knowing everything in immense detail. Sorry I can't be of any real help!