Messed up section B writing!

So what will happen now to my section B??

Ok for section B i went the question Persuade employer etc
Anyways i misread the question thinking it said "Write a letter to you employer to persuade them to give up their job for the summer holidays"

So i wrote a 1.5 pages about from the perspective of "Holidays 4 u" (A made up company name which could sell the person a holiday, kinda corny i know)

Basically i want to get an a but ive completely misread the question and obviously answered it incorrectly.

What now???

Oh dear
You will be marked down quite heavily for not answering the question I guess but after they work out what you are talking about they will still give you marks for your techniques, etc (I would assume anyway). Aw hun there's nothing you can do now so just forget about it and try and do well in Paper 2 :consoles: I thought it was a hard paper anyway. It was a lot like History with source 2 and 3 and I dropped History for a reason

lol ************* lol sorry << just got a bit over excited..it went soooooo welll..apart from the media being about votes :/ was going to feel asleep..oh and i dun the argue and persaude question which i found most easiers..just one question..it was about persuading to why voting for 16 year olds would be beneficial and argue the allowance of voting..i said how giving them the allownce wil grow a stronger bond between the young and old..which is efective as its no soething everyone wrote..i go for originality..and topersaude i pu in harsh sounding wods to how elders normaly think of us contrasting with soft sounding aliiteration to how we really are..put some personification such as these are th ewords dancing around in their heads...blah blah and ermm added in some persuasion by sayin how us voting would get beneficial for them NO EXPENSES and EMA back and oyster cards :P oh and ermm how us voting may even change lifes of wehn they are old and we are th new generation as there would be more pensions for them wen were in charge and to get us to do this they need to show respect to us in this way of giving us the vote... AND to top it off it was a speech so i put "is its time for change" nearly every end of pharaghraph for that efective use,, and linked this ending to each paragrap to the last conlcusion !! also included facts about how every 1/12 students ahve a govenrment memebr like mentality looool so we are not that stupid and how e already take importt decisions in life like GCSE and future paths ECT.. ieve included alliteration and spelling was top notch ..used semicolons after clearly learning how to use them and varied sentence strucutre. with all this am i on an A*? thanks a lot guys its been a pleasure with your critisms..jsut need to get an A* on next paper on thusday and im good to go

oh and for the facts and opinions i wrote how it engages the reader..and it mentioned 1982 which is the time where many motehrs and fathers would ahve lived through, and this is mainly aimed that them so puting audience into consideration and facts just beings authenticity to it and importance on it..higher issue and all that..langauge i wrote like 2 pages - 1 page perparagraph deep analysis and how the 'X" thingy might be a symbolisimg of stop and ban and daner ahead i we get the right to vote so porud if myself..thats A*? right

and comparisoni said how black is dul while green is nature maybe women wil bring a better society up? and contract between male and feemale..and bold text and wanted to add in caption but my pen RAN OUT..it was 2 PENS :\ oh and i wrote 14 sides..thats 7 full pages hope i got an A*..all i can do is pray that the examiner can read my hand writing and im good to go..only one doubt? i meantioned becomeing part of the govenor or sometihng in my persuasion ,,in the future..and we would give better presents and show mroe love towards the old, who are the governonrs and people who are giving us the vote of today.thatsnot realy on the question but its originality right? thanks a lot guys..this is why i LOVE TSR x

Ok for section B i went the question Persuade employer etc
Anyways i misread the question thinking it said "Write a letter to you employer to persuade them to give up their job for the summer holidays"

So i wrote a 1.5 pages about from the perspective of "Holidays 4 u" (A made up company name which could sell the person a holiday, kinda corny i know)

Basically i want to get an a but ive completely misread the question and obviously answered it incorrectly.

What now???

First of all, this is someone's thread, you completely ignored his question and went about posting your own completely irrelevant to what he asked.

Secondly, how is someone meant to understand what you are saying when you write like that? Improve your grammer and maybe your questions shall be answered.

grammar*


I wouldn't have, but as you were attacking his grammar, which I agree was absolutely appalling, I had to.

First of all, this is someone's thread, you completely ignored his question and went about posting your own completely irrelevant to what he asked.

Secondly, how is someone meant to understand what you are saying when you write like that? Improve your grammer and maybe your questions shall be answered.

I agree, someone is obviously writing on this thread to discuss their upset for the paper going wrong, and you just talk about how well it went in illegible text? Be a bit more considirate please. And this thread will probably get deleted you know... you have to wait 24 hours before discussing exams...

So what will happen now to my section B??

If your lucky and your work was REALLY GOOD the examiner may be just nice enough to give you some marks. the section IS to argue/persuade/advise, and you did persuade im hoping really well so you should get some marks. Just hope you did really well in paper 1 section a and try to ace paper 2. do get your overall B. and if your coursework is an average of A/A* you honestly shouldnt worry. you did it now and all you can do is hope, so good luck!
i did mine, but i did argue about practical and vocational subjects -letter. just managed to finish with 5 minutes to spare to read through my section b but not long enought tor ead through section a I]