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How far were the local rivalries among the nobility responsible for the outbreak of civil conflict in 1455?
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It is clear that the local rivalries among the nobility were a prominent factor in causing the outbreak of civil conflict in 1455, however the evidence shows that is was in fact King Henry VI’s inadequacies that were the root cause of the conflict, as it was his inability to control these rivalries that allowed them to escalate, sparking the war of the roses. King Henry VI’s other inadequacies include his mistreatment of the nobility and his lavish spending. Limiting factors to this argument include the view that the loss of France was responsible for the start of civil conflict however this is challenged by the fact some of the failures in France can be attributed to Henry’s inadequacies. These factors combine to support the view that it was Henry’s inadequacies that were responsible for the outbreak of civil conflict in 1455.
The evidence shows that it was King Henry VI’s inadequacies as kings that were responsible for the outbreak of civil conflict in 1455. This is because his failure to assert his authority meant that rivalries among the nobility were not resolved. The most influential conflict being that of the Neville’s and the Percy’s, however there were other feuds such as the Bonville’s and the Courtenay’s. When Henry VI did little or nothing to solve these matters the noble families were forced to chose sides, as the bitterness between them meant that they could not fight for the same cause. For example when the Percy’s latched onto the Lancastrian cause, this left the Neville’s to side with York. The Neville’s being such a powerful family made the Yorkist cause a lot more threatening and meant that civil conflict was able to commence in 1455. It was Henry’s inadequacies which allowed these disputes to gain such momentum as he did little to stop them and did nothing to punish nobles that were out of line.
Another Inadequacy of King Henry VI was his mistreatment of the nobility, particularly Richard, Duke of York. King Henry’s favouritism of the Duke of Somerset led York to believe that his position was threatened, causing him to go against Henry. After York had lent the King a lot of money to aid the unsuccessful war in France the King seemed unable to repay York and yet was able to grant money and rewards to Somerset. In addition to this Somerset has been given York’s position of Captain of Calais by Henry in 1451, while York was made Lieutenant of Ireland in 1447, a move he felt was to keep him out of the way. Evidence of York’s distaste for Somerset comes from 1454 when he became protector of the throne during Henry’s mental collapse as he had Somerset arrested. It is clear therefore that Henry VI’s inadequacies was the key to civil conflict as he was unable to treat his magnates evening, leaving the Duke of York feeling that he had no alternative but to use force to maintain his power.
A further reason that Henry VI’s inadequacies were responsible for the outbreak of civil conflict in 1455 was because of his lavish spending. Henry spent huge amounts on churches (in particular the chapel of Eton college and the chapel at King’s College Cambridge), his lifestyle and the unsuccessful war in France. As a result of this the government were £372,000 in debt in 1450 and so high levels of taxation were put in place. Cade’s rebellion is evidence of the publics distaste for this as 46.000 men marched from Kent to London seizing the city for a few days. These financial troubles caused by King Henry’s inefficiency are responsible for the outbreak of civil conflict in 1455 as it meant that Henry could not afford a standing army and therefore could not protect himself from over mighty nobles, such as York.
It could be argued that it was the loss of France that started the War of the Roses, and not Henry’s inadequacies, as this was a humiliating defeat for England which left her in a weak financial position. However it was Henry’s lack of interest in warfare that led to Frances victory as for example he allowed a two year truce to be made with France, during which no fighting took place. However while France recovered and built stronger armies, Henry did nothing, ensuring their victory. This highlights Henry’s weaknesses as it shows that he was a weak decision maker with no military skills needed for a King.
In conclusion it can be seen that King Henry VI’s inadequacies were responsible for the outbreak of civil conflict in 1455 as the absence of an affective King meant meant that nobles had to take matter into their own hands…