Basically yes, but I think the language and notation could be tidied up a bit (translation/transformation are not interchangeable and f(x) seems to be shifting in its meaning)
If f(x)=lnx
then f(-x)=ln(-x): so far we have a reflection in the y-axis.
Now if g(x)=ln(-x)
then ln(4-x)=g(x-4), so we get a translation of +4 in the x-direction.
The other way is to do the translation first
f(x)=ln(x), f(x+4)=ln(x+4): translation of -4 in the x-direction
Now if h(x)=ln(x+4), ln(-x+4)=h(-x), so we get a reflection in the y-axis.
So the overall transformation could be either "reflection in the y-axis followed by translation of +4 in x-direction" or "translation of -4 in x-direction followed by reflection in the y-axis". Note that swapping the order affects the transformations needed.
In this case it seems more natural to do it the first way, because it's more obvious to go from x to -x as a first step than to go to x+4, but either way works.