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New pop song I wrote - Make Me Shiver

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    Hey everyone,

    I just put out a new song called "Make Me Shiver". This one took a while to make, but I'm happy with how it came out.

    Here's the link: http://soundcloud.com/oneunknownmusic/make-me-shiver

    Let me know what you think!
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    I really like the piano part, especially in the middle. And I quite like the sound of your voice. However, I just feel like the background music (minus piano) doesn't quite fit somehow.

    Apart from that, it's pretty good .
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    (Original post by catastrophe)
    I really like the piano part, especially in the middle. And I quite like the sound of your voice. However, I just feel like the background music (minus piano) doesn't quite fit somehow.

    Apart from that, it's pretty good .
    agree with this^
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    (Original post by xxlissaxx)
    agree with this^
    Agree with this
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    It sounds really disjointed. The tempo and the pitch of the piano doesn't go with your singing.
    All in all, it is odd. It's like several songs have been mashed together.
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    Thanks for the comments guys.

    Is there anywhere in particular that it seems disjointed? Transitions maybe?

    Also do you think it's too long? And do you find it catchy? How do you think it compares to our first song: soundcloud.com/oneunknownmusic/ill-be-there-for-you?

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