New pop song I wrote - Make Me Shiver
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New pop song I wrote - Make Me ShiverHey everyone,
I just put out a new song called "Make Me Shiver". This one took a while to make, but I'm happy with how it came out.
Here's the link: http://soundcloud.com/oneunknownmusic/make-me-shiver
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Re: New pop song I wrote - Make Me ShiverI really like the piano part, especially in the middle. And I quite like the sound of your voice. However, I just feel like the background music (minus piano) doesn't quite fit somehow.
Apart from that, it's pretty good
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Re: New pop song I wrote - Make Me Shiveragree with this^(Original post by catastrophe)
I really like the piano part, especially in the middle. And I quite like the sound of your voice. However, I just feel like the background music (minus piano) doesn't quite fit somehow.
Apart from that, it's pretty good.
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Re: New pop song I wrote - Make Me ShiverThanks for the comments guys.
Is there anywhere in particular that it seems disjointed? Transitions maybe?
Also do you think it's too long? And do you find it catchy? How do you think it compares to our first song: soundcloud.com/oneunknownmusic/ill-be-there-for-you?
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