Don't worry about it (poem)
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Don't worry about it (poem)I won’t hold you to anything except making
my words get lost in my chest and not noticing
the look in my eyes when we speak.
I won’t hold you to anything because when we’re together,
in my dreams,
You make me happier than I ever thought I could be.
So you’re forgiven.Last edited by climbthewall; 04-04-2012 at 17:26. -
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Re: Don't worry about it (poem)thankyou!(Original post by sammy-lou)
I like this, it's so simple - it really doesn't need to say any more than it does. lovely
Although it got negged by someone...maybe i shouldve made it rhyme... -
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Re: Don't worry about it (poem)Haha, we all know it ain't a poem if it ain't rhyming...(Original post by climbthewall)
thankyou!
Although it got negged by someone...maybe i shouldve made it rhyme...
