(Original post by Thomas x)
This is a script/story I wrote a while back. It has several chapters and follows the life of some women.
Was really popular on another forum when I wrote it a good few months a go. Let me know what you think.
Mary: Hey Janice, long time no see, how are you?
Janice: Not too good really, you?
Mary: I'm grand, thank you. What's up with you?
Janice: Long story really, but John tried to kill me last night.
Mary: you're joking me?
*Mary spits out her orange*
Janice: I wish I was, but no. I managed to flee the flat and my neighbour rang the police. I'm not pressing charges. It's the last thing I want.
Mary: How awful. You won't go back to him, will you? I know things have been hard, but you deserve better mate.
Janice: No, no. Definitely not. That's it now. I have nowhere to stay as the flat's his, but Mum and Dad have been wonderful and just trying to move on now. If it wasn't for them then I'd be in the gutter. I have no money and he's taken everything I had.
Mary: Why don't you come over to mine tonight? Let your hair down and have a few drinks with me and the girls. I can put the kids to sleep early.
Janice: I'd love that. We have a lot to talk about.
Mary: Good. I can pick you up from your Mum's at 7, if that is OK with you? I have a plan, Jan, to sort this all out. We're all struggling financially at the moment and I only live down the road so don't ever feel a stranger. We're all here for you and always have been.
Janice: That means so much, thank you.
Mary: It's my pleasure. I won't ever forget the support you gave me when the house burnt down. You've been there for me and we're all here for you. Forget about John and focus on the people around you who love you. I've got to pick the kids up now from school, but be ready for 7 and I'll pap my hooter when I'm outside.
* Mary kisses the weak and fragile Janice on the cheak before walking in the opposite direction to pick up her kids*
"Bobby, Amy", Mary shouted as she saw her two tots at the school gates.
"Miss Gammolex", shouted a poshly dressed man as he flapped his legs fiercely towards Mary.
"Run", said Mary to her kids. Knowing the teacher would only be wanting school fees that hadn't and couldn't be paid for.
*Sisters Fammy and Michelle wait outside Mary's house*
Fammy: What time did she say she would be back?
Michelle: Anytime now. She is just collecting the children from school then coming straight home.
Fammy: Talk of the devil.
*Mary, Bobby and Amy could be seen walking up the road that Mary's house situated on *