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Re: it's Greek to mefee Φ fo fum(Original post by Dunc1)
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Not worth an Iota
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Re: it's Greek to meHi,
It's me again. First of all thank you for picking a topic close to my own specialisms in life. I really like the feel of the poem here and the varying digressions from continuing the alphabet. I feel that actually worked well and allowed you to develop quite a strong direction to the poem (i.e. we know where we are going due to the topic of the poem) while not being entirely sure how we'll be following that direction. Perhaps you could do something with beta a little earlier around 'alpha - bet', perhaps have the a in brackets i.e. 'alpha - bet (a)'. My main criticism would be that the poem isn't longer.
Great work and I look forward to seeing this poem develop.
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Re: it's Greek to methanks for another sensible commentary toronto !!(Original post by toronto353)
Hi,
It's me again. First of all thank you for picking a topic close to my own specialisms in life. I really like the feel of the poem here and the varying digressions from continuing the alphabet. I feel that actually worked well and allowed you to develop quite a strong direction to the poem (i.e. we know where we are going due to the topic of the poem) while not being entirely sure how we'll be following that direction. Perhaps you could do something with beta a little earlier around 'alpha - bet', perhaps have the a in brackets i.e. 'alpha - bet (a)'. My main criticism would be that the poem isn't longer.
Great work and I look forward to seeing this poem develop.
toronto353
glad you liked the Hellenic theme.
i will try to extend beyond epsilon.
the only thing i could think of was epsilon-delta which is a mathematical topic...
have a great Easter weekend !!
arctus
