[OscarTheDon]

Please take some time to have a look at my youtube channe and videos, I make comedic vlogs, I hope you Enjoy them.

www.youtube.com/clarkeyo

[toronto353]

(Original post by OscarTheDon)
Please take some time to have a look at my youtube channe and videos, I make comedic vlogs, I hope you Enjoy them.

www.youtube.com/clarkeyo

Hi,
First of all thanks for posting a link to your channel. It can be difficult to write a blog, but even more difficult to deliver a vlog. I would say that you may want to avoid calling them comedic. I'm not entirely sure on the Kony one where the humour was so I'd avoid calling it comedic. In terms of content, it was well researched and it was clearly a topic that interested you and that came across. I'd try to be more confident with your vlog. I'd also try to create more of a structure to your vlogs. They can ramble from topic to topic and you may want to set out a path more of where they are going.

There's a lot of good material here, but it's about structure now and confidence.

I look forward to seeing your vlogging develop.

toronto353

[OscarTheDon]

Hi there, thankyou for the feedback on my channel, the Kony video was meant to me serious i wasn't making that as a joke. I have plenty of confidence I fully agree however with adding more structure to my vlogs, I feel that more planning would help them out a bit, Thankyou for responding and taking the time out to watch the videos.