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  1. climbthewall's Avatar
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    a can of worms
    I remember that day when mum was washing up after dinner and I, feeling too at ease from good exchange and being drunk, released a blow that struck her popliteals.
    I pretended not to notice that she pretended not to mind.
    In the kitchen, words spilled out that I’ve since wanted to gobble up a thousand times.
    She nodded and feigned a smile as I spoke, while by her side, picked away thumb cuticles with her candid finger.
    Last edited by climbthewall; 09-04-2012 at 15:12.
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    Re: a can of worms
    you thumped your Mum's knees ?
    either she is incredibly tall or you are incredibly short...
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    Re: a can of worms
    (Original post by the bear)
    you thumped your Mum's knees ?
    either she is incredibly tall or you are incredibly short...
    lol no, it's a metaphor. I told her some news (a blow) that caught her off-guard. ie. like being hit behind your knees, it makes your legs buckle.

    I guess having to explain your writing isn't a very good sign :/
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    Re: a can of worms
    Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?
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    (Original post by climbthewall)
    lol no, it's a metaphor. I told her some news (a blow) that caught her off-guard. ie. like being hit behind your knees, it makes your legs buckle.

    I guess having to explain your writing isn't a very good sign :/
    sorry... i was reading it too literally
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    Re: a can of worms
    Don't like your use of the word candid, there are far better words available.
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    (Original post by cyfer)
    Don't like your use of the word candid, there are far better words available.
    i do, i think it fits, why don't you like it?
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    (Original post by climbthewall)
    i do, i think it fits, why don't you like it?
    etymology. It is such a hypocritical word in the modern world.
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