Hey there! Sign in to join this conversationNew here? Join for free

Experimental short-movie"EGO" (2012) - Dublin - Irlande

Announcements Posted on
  1. Offline

    "EGO" is an experimental short film about dream and personality.
    It tells the story of a man who wishes to figure out the meaning of his dream and ends up discovering new insights on his personnality.

    It's my first production.

    THE LINK: https://vimeo.com/39637196

    Don't hesitate to comment it.


    Written & produced by Thomas Loas & Romain Ducassé.
    © RisingMind Productions.
  2. Offline

    First of all thank you for posting this video. I have got to say that there is certainly a lot of intelligent thought and work that has gone into this story. There are a few issues, but I'll begin by highlighting the main positives. The use of a book as some kind of key theme throughout the work helped to ensure continuity, but also helped to provide some kind of link throughout each of the scenes. A lot of the acting was good with only a few issues here and there. The music chosen fitted perfectly to the storyline. There was some good development of a plot throughout the piece. The use of the variety of angles worked well. I liked the scene with the nodding off and the second time when we thought that he would go to sleep he didn't - I loved the play on the rather cliched scene type of falling to sleep. I also liked how you made it clear the source of the soundtrack.

    While there are many positives and the above are just what I remember, I feel at times the actor doesn't really make the actions believable - especially at the start. The storyline isn't always obvious really and there's almost the idea of why does he do action X that isn't explained? If there are dream sequences, make them clearer. If not, try to remove that ambiguity more.

    A great piece of film and I think that there's a lot of promise here. I look forward to viewing your next video,



Submit reply


Thanks for posting! You just need to create an account in order to submit the post
  1. this can't be left blank
    that username has been taken, please choose another Forgotten your password?
  2. this can't be left blank
    this email is already registered. Forgotten your password?
  3. this can't be left blank

    6 characters or longer with both numbers and letters is safer

  4. this can't be left empty
    your full birthday is required
  1. Oops, you need to agree to our Ts&Cs to register
  2. Slide to join now Processing…

Updated: April 13, 2012
TSR Support Team

We have a brilliant team of more than 60 Support Team members looking after discussions on The Student Room, helping to make it a fun, safe and useful place to hang out.

Today on TSR

Don't be a half-term hermit

How to revise this week and still have a life

What's your biggest deadly sin?
Useful resources

Quick link:

Unanswered creative corner threads

Groups associated with this forum:

View associated groups
Quick reply
Reputation gems: You get these gems as you gain rep from other members for making good contributions and giving helpful advice.