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telemon
Fleeing across the wide ocean
Butting the wild horizon
Windjammed goosewing
Tracing the lee shore
A storm-born dithyrhamb
Spat from the briny alembic
Defying pirates who mutter
Curses into their beards and
Bite doubloons on the oorlop
Skittering the Skaggeråk
On this ship I am the captain
And cook and carpenter I
Sing shanties alone and
Keep all the watches
You may try to board but
I will repel you -
Re: telemonI'll be doing the rounds and commenting on what takes my fancy later, though I always enjoy bear's and your's poems so I should be commenting on them.(Original post by Dunc1)
I liked todays poems my earnest ursine, i'm surprised no-one else has commented.
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Re: telemonI think people are studying hard & have not time to savour the finer things in life(Original post by Dunc1)
I liked todays poems my earnest ursine, i'm surprised no-one else has commented.
My next work will be based on the National Trust's list of 50 things you should do by the time you are 11&3/4
