[Miracle Day]

Basically, I'm wondering if someone will read my coursework, a short story (750 words) worth 25% of my final mark for English Literature and give me some feedback/help me. I'm really bad at creative writing see

[Miracle Day]

bumppp

[Miracle Day]

(Original post by DanielMartin)
Sure,

I've got 77/80 for my english lit/lang writing coursework at AS i.e. this year, email it me: fgldannymartin@gmail.com

Thank you so much! I will type it out now and send it to you

Again thanks, this means alot!

[DanielMartin]

(Original post by Miracle Day)
Thank you so much! I will type it out now and send it to you

Again thanks, this means alot!

Yeah yeah, enough whining, just type it and send it.

[usycool1]

I'm also happy to read it PM it to me if you like

[Miracle Day]

(Original post by DanielMartin)
Yeah yeah, enough whining, just type it and send it.

On second thoughts, I don't want to send it to you.

Anyone else?

[NabilKhan]

holla at me nabil_khan@hotmail.co.uk

[Mirpurs_Finest!]

Bro pm it me innit, I'm sik at english yo, il gis u proppa constructive feedback blud

[Miracle Day]

(Original post by NabilKhan)
holla at me nabil_khan@hotmail.co.uk

What are your grades in English?

Thanks for posting.

[DanielMartin]

(Original post by Miracle Day)
On second thoughts, I don't want to send it to you.

Anyone else?

Oh good. Save me the time of reading some gutter dog prose. Please, enlighten your fellow peers with interest, as I sit here, drinking tea contemplating what a shallow person you are.

You asked me to read it, I don't care for boring utterances that cater nothing, so by all means.

[Miracle Day]

(Original post by DanielMartin)
Oh good. Save me the time of reading some gutter dog prose. Please, enlighten your fellow peers with interest, as I sit here, drinking tea contemplating what a shallow person you are.

You asked me to read it, I don't care for boring utterances that cater nothing, so by all means.

Okay

[Mirpurs_Finest!]

(Original post by DanielMartin)
Oh good. Save me the time of reading some gutter dog prose. Please, enlighten your fellow peers with interest, as I sit here, drinking tea contemplating what a shallow person you are.

You asked me to read it, I don't care for boring utterances that cater nothing, so by all means.

Stfu blud no one cares ya sad lil s***

[NabilKhan]

(Original post by Miracle Day)
What are your grades in English?

Thanks for posting.

at GCSE i got an A*