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  1. Wake1988's Avatar
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    My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    Hi all,
    I've been playing guitar for a few years and have only recently decided to start trying to sing. I'm really into City and Colour at the minute, but all the vocals are sang at quite a high pitch, I'm not sure if I can pull it off heh.

    Could you please give me your complete and utter honest feedback? I've been asked to sing and play at house parties before but have always been too scared to sing because I honestly have no idea how I sound. If I sound absolutely woeful then do tell me!!

    Here's a link, it's just a short piece of a song:
    http://soundcloud.com/colesl4w-1/hopefornow


    Let me know if the link doesn't work for you. Please do be critical about what you hear!!
    Last edited by Wake1988; 19-04-2012 at 18:56.
  2. laurentommo's Avatar
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    My opinion that was really good, you have nothing to worry about!
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    Definitely good enough to whip out at housepartys mate!
  4. Mishmashmoo's Avatar
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    I'd be very proud if I were you. Don't be afraid to sing in public, I'm sure most people will be impressed
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    I am sorry I have to say this, but you asked us to be completely honest.
    You are very good at it.
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    that was great you sound a bit like dallas green look up City and Coulour
  7. Wake1988's Avatar
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    Wow.. thanks for all the positive comments. I really.. REALLY didn't expect that.



    (Original post by kingkongjaffa)
    that was great you sound a bit like dallas green look up City and Coulour
    Haha it was a City and Colour song I was singing! I guess that's a good sign :O.
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    The higher E you sing sounds a little flat to me.
    However, it's a kinda high note in that register so it should sound better with practice.
    Notbadtho.
  9. OpenArms's Avatar
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    I thought you played the guitar very well for your first ever time :rolleyes:
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    (Original post by Wake1988)
    Hi all,
    I've been playing guitar for a few years and have only recently decided to start trying to sing. I'm really into City and Colour at the minute, but all the vocals are sang at quite a high pitch, I'm not sure if I can pull it off heh.

    Could you please give me your complete and utter honest feedback? I've been asked to sing and play at house parties before but have always been too scared to sing because I honestly have no idea how I sound. If I sound absolutely woeful then do tell me!!

    Here's a link, it's just a short piece of a song:
    http://soundcloud.com/colesl4w-1/hopefornow


    Let me know if the link doesn't work for you. Please do be critical about what you hear!!
    For a first time that was pretty good! Singing while playing is hard so you've done well. Your voice is a little bit flat; but I suspect that's due to nerves more than anything. It's good though; make sure you realise that
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    Sounds wicked.
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    Your Es are a tad odd. I think it's your upper limit. Try singing in flat notes next time, you may find it more comfortable.

    Aside from comfort, that was really good.

    The guitar playing wasn't awfully intricate - Definitely could work on that but I assume you're more concerned about vocals than guitar so I'm not gonna go there.

    Well done overall
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    I think you sing a bit lower, instead of hitting the higher notes. but definitely a good start
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    I agree with a few people above - a tiny bit out of tune in some places, but on the whole it's not too shabby.
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    I enjoyed it, very well done.
  16. You Failed's Avatar
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    Very pleasantly surprised! It was pretty good
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    (Original post by hassi94)
    For a first time that was pretty good! Singing while playing is hard so you've done well. Your voice is a little bit flat; but I suspect that's due to nerves more than anything. It's good though; make sure you realise that
    Why would he be nervous in his room recording himself when he can just press delete and start again at any point


    You said be honest - You sound a little whiney to me but fine for a party. You have a good voice I just think you need to practice.
  18. rj1990's Avatar
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    Re: My first time singing and playing guitar - need your complete honesty!
    I think it's really good man, I will be honest. Got that coldplayish type sound to it and your voice is really good. I can't pick a big fault. Or even a small one. And did you write the song? try and finish it, it's got a good melody.
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