[princess271]

(Original post by seventwoseven)
Do we really need to know how many participants were in each study? -_- I emailed my teacher an answer and she said to improve it I should write how many participants. I don't know about anyone else, but remembering the number of participants and percentages etc for 54 studies is nigh on impossible.

sometimes you dont need to but sometimes you do lolx

[seventwoseven]

(Original post by princess271)
Attachment 153683 can someone give me some feedback
thanks x

Apart from tidying up your English and spelling, that looks very good. You know, less commas and more sentences etc. Everything's very well explained though.

Also, Eberhardt is a woman. So 'he' should be 'she'. Lol but I'm sure they wouldn't care when they mark it XD

[princess271]

(Original post by seventwoseven)
Apart from tidying up your English and spelling, that looks very good. You know, less commas and more sentences etc. Everything's very well explained though.

Also, Eberhardt is a woman. So 'he' should be 'she'. Lol but I'm sure they wouldn't care when they mark it XD

lol i got no spell checker

[princess271]

(Original post by seventwoseven)
Apart from tidying up your English and spelling, that looks very good. You know, less commas and more sentences etc. Everything's very well explained though.

Also, Eberhardt is a woman. So 'he' should be 'she'. Lol but I'm sure they wouldn't care when they mark it XD

I just checked my work now lol
only spelt one word wrong "investigates"

[princess271]

To what extent can research into alternatives to imprisonment be considered ethnocentric (15)

what can I write for this??
x

[princess271]

[QUOTE=asaaal;37910020]I was wondering if anyone could be nice enough to look at these essays for me and give me some feedback ;p. Im so so scared for this exam . Thankssss

June 2010 – section B
To what extent does the cognitive approach provide an explanation of criminal behaviour?

your works brilliant
much better than mines

[alexswartz]

i'm having trouble with more than 1 paragraph for evaluation of reliability
what types of reliability can i use other than inter rater reliability?
example: "evaluate the reliability of research into interviewing witnesses"

also any idea about "appropriateness" questions? is it asking about usefullness/practical applications or validity or what?

[jessplease]

(Original post by alexswartz)
i'm having trouble with more than 1 paragraph for evaluation of reliability
what types of reliability can i use other than inter rater reliability?
example: "evaluate the reliability of research into interviewing witnesses"

also any idea about "appropriateness" questions? is it asking about usefullness/practical applications or validity or what?

For reliability the main factors you can look at are control, sample bias, causal relationship, also as validity tends to go in hand with reliability you could talk about Eco validity as if you were to repeat under realistic settings may get diff results

[asaaal]

[QUOTE=princess271;37911622]

(Original post by asaaal)
I was wondering if anyone could be nice enough to look at these essays for me and give me some feedback ;p. Im so so scared for this exam . Thankssss

June 2010 – section B
To what extent does the cognitive approach provide an explanation of criminal behaviour?

your works brilliant
much better than mines

im starting to think youre saying it out of petty . nobody else has ven gave me feedback.. i think it mustnt be that good.
Noo yours are really good, i was looking at them last night . well done!
Ive only revised 50 studies .. :|

[asaaal]

(Original post by princess271)
I was wondering if anyone could be nice enough to look at these essays for me and give me some feedback ;p. Im so so scared for this exam . Thankssss

June 2010 – section B
To what extent does the cognitive approach provide an explanation of criminal behaviour?

your works brilliant
much better than mines

im starting to think youre saying it out of petty . nobody else has ven gave me feedback.. i think it mustnt be that good.
Noo yours are really good, i was looking at them last night . well done!
Ive only revised 50 studies .. :|

[Lollyage]

One week exactly

But on the bright side of things, a week later at this time, it will all be over

[princess271]

(Original post by asaaal)
im starting to think youre saying it out of petty . nobody else has ven gave me feedback.. i think it mustnt be that good.
Noo yours are really good, i was looking at them last night . well done!
Ive only revised 50 studies .. :|

I only started revising on Saturday
Was crying to my mum saying I wont be getting an A LOL
Thank you
seriously yours are good

[asaaal]

(Original post by princess271)
I only started revising on Saturday
Was crying to my mum saying I wont be getting an A LOL
Thank you
seriously yours are good

aw thanks, my teacher hasnt marked ANY of our classes essays its so annoying i really dont know what mark im at :'(!

ahhaah aw :P
what grade do you need in this exam? what did you get last year in AS?

[asaaal]

can ask why people are saying 54 studies when theres actually 72? Am i missing something lol?

[princess271]

(Original post by asaaal)
aw thanks, my teacher hasnt marked ANY of our classes essays its so annoying i really dont know what mark im at :'(!

ahhaah aw :P
what grade do you need in this exam? what did you get last year in AS?

I need a B I think
not sure
wbu?

[Lollyage]

(Original post by asaaal)
can ask why people are saying 54 studies when theres actually 72? Am i missing something lol?

Some people have missed out topics, like as a college we don't do After a Guilty Verdict and we also know explanations/treatments for only one dysfunctional behaviour (phobias).

[asaaal]

(Original post by princess271)
I need a B I think
not sure
wbu?

i have a mid A in AS so i need like a C/D in this as i have a B in G544.
I think thats right to get a B overall ?

[SalC]

Hi everyone - glad to see it's not just me that despises this exam! I'm a little confused about the layout of the whole exam - it's 100 marks right? How is this made up? I know section A is a 10 marker where you have to describe one particular study but that's it Any help?

Thanks!
Sal

[jessplease]

(Original post by SalC)
Hi everyone - glad to see it's not just me that despises this exam! I'm a little confused about the layout of the whole exam - it's 100 marks right? How is this made up? I know section A is a 10 marker where you have to describe one particular study but that's it Any help?

Thanks!
Sal

4 exam questions (2 health 2 forensic depending on what sections youre doing)
within each question there is a section a worth 10 marks and a section b worth 15 marks

section a is describe, section b is evaluate

[princess271]

(Original post by asaaal)
i have a mid A in AS so i need like a C/D in this as i have a B in G544.
I think thats right to get a B overall ?

think so not sure :P