(Original post by Elouise94)
I was so worried about Paper 2 all weekend, before looking here and seeing that most peoples essays have been similar to mine haha!
I did question 6 and 18, for 6 i did WWII,
Versailles, touched on St.Germain-Mostly talked about how this helped Hitlers rise to power and gained him popularity.
Wall Street Crash, Great depression etc, Dawes plan (totally forgot about the Young plan), and the reparations
Obviously again, Hitlers rise to power and how he appealed to the masses, Lebensraum, I put appeasement as an ideology and I thought it was wrong, but I've seen other people have now which has made me less worried
I didn't even think about communism until the end, so I quickly added a paragraph about the West using Germany as a buffer from the USSR.
All in all, I think my essay was a bit basic, but what do you guys think?? I am aiming for a lvl 6.
I used 3 historians (well, Churchill, Lloyd George and AJP Taylor quotes) for question 6, and none for question 18.
Thank you for any feedback!
Good luck everyone on paper 3 tomorrow!