[legallyblondelol]

I wrote this poem today while sitting in the woods smoking and drinking with my friends. It is reflective of the last week of my life. I hope you like it..

Hot August night
No expectations but chance
My precious and perfect one lands in my hands
We dance and forget the existence of time

Heartbreak was that intangible state
I mocked and never believed
Now I am sad and broken
I can believe it

One final kiss and you tell me it's time
I stroll into the steamy streets
Your red bite is fresh and lingers on my neck
I force myself into the night and leave you, darling

Missing somebody always hurts
But to miss yet know the missed one
Is the one whom you will see again never again
Makes for emptiness so powerful it feels like disease

You make my heart beat fast
You make my palms sweat
Sometimes your heart knows things your mind can't explain
My heart doesn't race for anyone else

A week away and every step is a step further
Temporally and spatially away from your being
The pain I feel as I hurtle further away in time
Leaves a hole in my heart as though you took something

How could I fall for somebody with this intensity
But the cruel fate is that we could not be in this life
In a parallel world we would be so beautiful
For now you are a sickness of my mind
And this life tried to remedy your absence with my pain

Hold me hard against you before we go

[catherine12345]

Impressive well done


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[Alakamind]

You went in, ratings.

[the bear]

A very romantic poem

[Dobrzynski]

I wouldn't say it was romantic, but lustful.

[the bear]

(Original post by Dobrzynski)
I wouldn't say it was romantic, but lustful.

lustfully romantic

[GabGirl]

Considering you wrote this just casually while you were out with some friends i'd say that it is pretty good .

[Rational Thinker]

To OP the fact you would smoke and drink in a wood shows you are retarded.

[memomemootoo]

(Original post by Rational Thinker)
To OP the fact you would smoke and drink in a wood shows you are retarded.

or maybe your post is retarded.

OP, i think your poem is lovely

[Rational Thinker]

(Original post by memomemootoo)
or maybe your post is retarded.

OP, i think your poem is lovely

Could you try adding capital letters? Or would that be too difficult for you?

[memomemootoo]

(Original post by Rational Thinker)
Could you try adding capital letters? Or would that be too difficult for you?

sorry if my lack of capitals offended you.. but yes, i find it very difficult to fulfil the demands of people who sound like as*holes

[Rational Thinker]

(Original post by memomemootoo)
sorry if my lack of capitals offended you.. but yes, i find it very difficult to fulfil the demands of people who sound like as*holes

Cool story bro, would you like to tell it again?

[pellejema]

(Original post by Rational Thinker)
To OP the fact you would smoke and drink in a wood shows you are retarded.

Nah it doesn't. Samuel Taylor Coleridge wrote his best works on opium. You could say the same for many of the other Romantic poets. That's a very narrow minded view dude.

[Rational Thinker]

(Original post by pellejema)
Nah it doesn't. Samuel Taylor Coleridge wrote his best works on opium. You could say the same for many of the other Romantic poets. That's a very narrow minded view dude.

Are you completely retarded? Smoking in a wood is a fire hazard. Smoking at all shows you to be an ill disciplined person but smoking in a wood is ignorant and evil.

[memomemootoo]

(Original post by Rational Thinker)
Are you completely retarded? Smoking in a wood is a fire hazard. Smoking at all shows you to be an ill disciplined person but smoking in a wood is ignorant and evil.

your computer is a fire hazard.. i think you should get off tsr and go to a forest to hug trees

[Rational Thinker]

(Original post by memomemootoo)
your computer is a fire hazard.. i think you should get off tsr and go to a forest to hug trees

My computer in not a fire hazard it is made with cooling mechanisms to stop it getting overheated. I think you should learn to use punctuation. Also is tree hugger supposed to be an insult, I take it as a compliment. I love nature and I am not a parasite like you

[pellejema]

(Original post by Rational Thinker)
Are you completely retarded? Smoking in a wood is a fire hazard. Smoking at all shows you to be an ill disciplined person but smoking in a wood is ignorant and evil.

lol i don't really think many fires have been created in the UK by smoking in a wood. your concern for the environment is kinda admirable though, despite your silliness x

[memomemootoo]

(Original post by Rational Thinker)
My computer in not a fire hazard it is made with cooling mechanisms to stop it getting overheated. I think you should learn to use punctuation. Also is tree hugger supposed to be an insult, I take it as a compliment. I love nature and I am not a parasite like you

heh i think you may find that we're all parasites ..including you

[Rational Thinker]

(Original post by memomemootoo)
heh i think you may find that we're all parasites ..including you

I agree humans are parasites but me personally much less than you. I recycle, pick up other peoples litter with a litterpick and I don't drive and it annoys me off when some little ****, not only smokes but smokes in the woods and then writes a piss poor poem in an attempt to get attention. People like that are oxyge thiefs.

[memomemootoo]

(Original post by Rational Thinker)
I agree humans are parasites but me personally much less than you. I recycle, pick up other peoples litter with a litterpick and I don't drive and it annoys me off when some little ****, not only smokes but smokes in the woods and then writes a piss poor poem in an attempt to get attention. People like that are oxyge thiefs.

pfft ..what makes you think that i'm more of a parasite than you? ..i recycle and pick up litter too (by hand, unlike you).. and i dont drive either.. and also i'm a nudist and i've learnt to levitate instead of walking so that i don't accidentally step on any living organisms.. also i don't eat food and photosynthesise instead... and on weekends i like to swim out into the ocean to free dolphins which get trapped in plastic bags.. and also i sing to the plankton at my local harbour every tuesday.

beat that