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  1. nash_4_lyf's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by Alakamind)
    Respect bro, true talks.
    PTChhhh....IM A girl...DONT BRO MEEE !!!

    It's kool, if you need any help or anything I can listen to your stuff or pass it on to my cousin, but thats not saying you'll get signed or anything, they might just try to help youse better yourself. x
  2. Alakamind's Avatar
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    (Original post by U.Ahmed)
    This one was rather impressive.
    Who did you steal off this time?
    That one I made up on the spot, come at me bro with a 8 bar, I will send for you back
  3. Alakamind's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by SubAtomic)
    Why do I hear click click, you ran out of bullets? You broke G give it up hahaha

    How about when I pull out the strap it isn't a grip it's a strap on dick and I am going to **** you with it cos yeah I'm sick you little bitch.
    Dont talk that gun talk when you aint living it
    Mandem round me with heat,theyll be bringin it
    Straps'll be singin like christmas carol hits
    Wastemen will be dropping like bowling pin double splits!
  4. Alakamind's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by nash_4_lyf)
    PTChhhh....IM A girl...DONT BRO MEEE !!!

    It's kool, if you need any help or anything I can listen to your stuff or pass it on to my cousin, but thats not saying you'll get signed or anything, they might just try to help youse better yourself. x

    ty dear, add me as a friend, me and your cousin can make things happen.
  5. U.Ahmed's Avatar
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    I wish I could rap, but I have no lyrical flow, especially in comparison to you, UK's answer to Soulja Boy.
    But you keep it up my friend, keep hustling for that dough.
  6. Alakamind's Avatar
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    (Original post by U.Ahmed)
    I wish I could rap, but I have no lyrical flow, especially in comparison to you, UK's answer to Soulja Boy.
    But you keep it up my friend, keep hustling for that dough.
    This guy thinks hes hard but he will get straight parred
    You will be listening to my strap blow, layin on the floor dead
    My man tryna spray bars, go do your friday prayer ahmed.
  7. Reform's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by Alakamind)
    You tell me to say nuttin but ima say suttin
    Mandem like you act hard but when we link up roadside ur frontin
    I dont even talks, its straight straps pumpin
    Leave you on the ground with your head full of lead gunnin
    Dont talk greeze about febreeze cos when I pull out the maggy ull hear dat ting sneeze!

    ACHOO
    Ay yo, check it

    I shoot the whole place up, (it wasn't me) call me shaggy
    leave you underwater dawg, near the krusty krabby
    real life ****, you cant say that it was laggy
    so you better watch your mouth cause I got no regrets, dappy.


    SAY NUTTING. ON THIS RAP TING. YOU AINT GOT NUTTIN ON ME, SON.

    TAKE A SEAT WITH ALL THE OTHER LOST OPPONENTS >>>>>>>>
    Last edited by Reform; 30-05-2012 at 23:55.
  8. somethingbeautiful's Avatar
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    TSR + Rapping is like David Cameron + break dancing. Stick to your pimm's and polo shirt 'bro'.
  9. Alakamind's Avatar
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    (Original post by SubAtomic)
    Lol troll, shut up boy, I didn't say I would shoot you I said I would **** you with a dildo.
    Why are you acting all homo
    Telling me to shut up boy, when your manboobs flapping up and down like a yo-yo
    Dont talk hard cos you're not all sho-sho
    CD out next month, make sure you cop the promo!
  10. Reform's Avatar
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    (Original post by alakamind)
    why are you acting all homo
    telling me to shut up boy, when your manboobs flapping up and down like a yo-yo
    dont talk hard cos you're not all sho-sho
    cd out next month, make sure you cop the promo!
    lol dat was straight fire.
  11. nash_4_lyf's Avatar
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    I swerr your rappin your way through life!! lol!! You havent spoken in normal english, you've just been rappin your replies!

    NOW THATS DEDICATION LOVE!
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    you a disgrace to hayes
  13. Reform's Avatar
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    (Original post by nash_4_lyf)
    I swerr your rappin your way through life!! lol!! You havent spoken in normal english, you've just been rappin your replies!

    NOW THATS DEDICATION LOVE!
    Lol you his groupie?
  14. U.Ahmed's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by Alakamind)
    This guy thinks hes hard but he will get straight parred
    You will be listening to my strap blow, layin on the floor dead
    My man tryna spray bars, go do your friday prayer ahmed.
    Allow me
    I am genuinely your biggest fan, I am privileged to have been one of the first to have heard your bars.
    Your flow, second to none.
    Lyrically, your a genius.
    Punchline wise, your taking over the division like your Muhammad Ali man.

    No one is touching you.
  15. Alakamind's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by nash_4_lyf)
    I swerr your rappin your way through life!! lol!! You havent spoken in normal english, you've just been rappin your replies!

    NOW THATS DEDICATION LOVE!
    Thank you love, rapping my way to success
    Lyrics taking over my brain so im trying to compress
    I see haters on the block trying to cause me distress
    But whats that to a dan like me, there pawns and mn the king, call it chess.
  16. U.Ahmed's Avatar
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    Why does this come into my head every time I read one of your freestyles?

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hCLy8K3RQpE

    I am sure this is OP.
  17. DolallyDucky's Avatar
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    It's probably embarrassing for me that I have absolutely no clue what that just said. :cute:
  18. nash_4_lyf's Avatar
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    (Original post by Reform)
    Lol you his groupie?
    LOL noo I just made an observation and decided to point it out! Dont hate
  19. Alakamind's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by Reform)
    Ay yo, check it

    I shoot the whole place up, (it wasn't me) call me shaggy
    leave you underwater dawg, near the krusty krabby
    real life ****, you cant say that it was laggy
    so you better watch your mouth cause I got no regrets, dappy.


    SAY NUTTING. ON THIS RAP TING. YOU AINT GOT NUTTIN ON ME, SON.

    TAKE A SEAT WITH ALL THE OTHER LOST OPPONENTS >>>>>>>>
    Talkin about dappy, little chi chi boy keep wearing your nappy
    Think your on this rap ting when your bars are just tacky
    Tellin me to watch my mouth like you own some maggys
    Magnum 4,5 in your face, rip of your cheekbones and put em in the baggy.
  20. Reform's Avatar
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    Re: My rap
    (Original post by nash_4_lyf)
    LOL noo I just made an observation and decided to point it out! Dont hate
    Lol nah, I see no reason to hate. Just an observation I made which I decided to point out
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