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  1. sammy-lou's Avatar
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    War Child (a poem)
    Your face seems strange in reality’s reach;
    It is a face that belongs in a frame.
    If I touch you will you fall with a smash?
    Is your smile forever frozen that way?
    It’s on a mouth that I’ll see all my life,
    See it laughing and kissing and crying.
    Kiss me when I’m waking from a nightmare,
    Laugh and cry because you’re here. Not dying.

    I don’t remember kisses with stubble.
    I don’t remember your faint father scent.
    I don’t remember the crush of your hold.
    I remember your absence, my lament.

    Proud tales of my father: hero soldier,
    Promises that you’d come home one day soon.
    So I waited, Daddy, waited for you,
    and I knew you were waiting for me too.
    Last edited by sammy-lou; 02-06-2012 at 00:40.
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    Re: War Child (a poem)
    Lovely, Sincere And Captivating .
    A very heartfelt and poignant poem Sammy-Lou and much deeper in meaning than a poem of mere face-value of a single dimension.
    Aside from a student-life (study permitting) one of my favorite hideaways is found on the paper and the dashes of wonder that I create through poetry. Always nice to see a fellow poet online on TSR.

    The Lord Hudson
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    Re: War Child (a poem)
    (Original post by The Lord Hudson)
    Lovely, Sincere And Captivating .
    A very heartfelt and poignant poem Sammy-Lou and much deeper in meaning than a poem of mere face-value of a single dimension.
    Aside from a student-life (study permitting) one of my favorite hideaways is found on the paper and the dashes of wonder that I create through poetry. Always nice to see a fellow poet online on TSR.

    The Lord Hudson
    Thank you very much for your kind comments

    I see your new here - it's nice to hear from you! I post a lot on TSR so have a look if you get a chance some time. And let me know if you ever post any of your work. There aren't enough poets on here!
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