(Original post by Wazza999)
I put a couple of things differently:
11 The city was set on fire
"The city was set alight"
13 She was always chasing them and causing bad things to happen to them
"She always chases them and provides bad things for them"
When she heard these things, Dido admired Aeneas and perceived him to be the bravest (man).
"...Dido was amazed at Aeneas and noticed that he was very brave"
On the one hand, during the day, Dido often asked him to tell the story again, and on the other hand, at night, during her sleep, Dido seemed to see him and hear his voice;
"...Dido appeared to see him in her sleep and hear his voice"
so that soon she lovesick Aeneas the most, and forgot about the man(?) Sychaeus.
"with the result that she loved Aeneas, having forgotten her husband Sychaeus"
And at last Aeneas himself decided to remain in Lybia and establish a new homeland there for the Trojans.
Damn, I thought Dido was the subject
"And finally Dido decided to remain with him in Lybia..."
15 He was angry
"He got angry"
17 To force Aeneas to leave at once, having prepared the ships.
"To force Aeneas to prepare his ship immediately and go away"
18 Because he had seen Hermes
"Because the god appeared to him"
24 She had betrayed her husband and was now heartbroken
"She loved Aeneas and didn't want to live without him"