[Tinkizmo]

Hi

I'm doing my A2 coursework on how contrast affects visual acuity, and I'm slightly confused. I gave my teacher a first draft and she said I had written it like a 'story', which isn't good. Apparently I need to bullet point everything and she told me to look through the exemplars to see what she meant.

But this exemplar is similar to mine: https://qks.southlakesfederation.co....n/exemplar.pdf

Anyone have any advice on how to structure it in words, layout, etc? And is anyone doing a similar experiment?

Thanks!

[Coursework.info]

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[Jam']

It's hard to get high marks in A2 Biology coursework if you use animals / humans in your investigation. It's to do with variable control, to which you are very much limited as it's hard to control the lives of people / animals to ensure they are all very biologically similar and to ensure that they are equally affected by their environments.

I would reconsider if I were you. Plants are a good one to do. To be honest, ingenuity isn't rewarded at A Level. As long as you tick boxes is all that matters. Keeping it basic is the best way to achieve as many marks as possible.