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Netzach II
Mummy what is this place ?
There is a smell of burning
Is this where they look after
Our suitcase ?
I have put dolly in there
I will play with her tomorrow
Look in the other queue
There is Mrs Goldfarb and Arnie
Why are they crying ?
Where is Mr Goldfarb going ?
You said Daddy would be here
I cannot see him
Soon it will be Shabbas
Daddy must come to read the blessing
Will they take care of my glasses ?
How will they know whose are whose ?
I hope the shower will be warm
Please help me with my buttons MummyLast edited by the bear; 18-07-2012 at 05:19. -
Re: Netzach IIIt is a good piece, I meant more why did 'it' have to happen.(Original post by the bear)
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Re: Netzach IIGod only knows(Original post by Dunc1)
It is a good piece, I meant more why did 'it' have to happen.