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Help with coursework/commentary AS engilsh lang

I'm not sure how to improve my coursework and commentary. I gave my first draft in and the teacher didn't tell me how to improve it apart from change my layout, he doesn't annotate my work or anything, he just gave me a post-it note with 3 points on it. I'm really struggling as I don't know how to improve it, any help/advice please?

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