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Scly4 crime and deviance model answers and structure help

Hi guys,

I've been set my first 21 mark essay on Marxist/Socialist theory on crime and deviance. I just need some guidance in general about the structure for the essay, I know I have to write it in 30 minutes. Does this mean I have to quickly skim over AO1 briefly and focus mainly on the AO2?

Also if you guys know where I can find some A/A* answers so that I can look at what contents I need to include.

Thank you.x:smile:
Original post by DIL$-SOL
Hi guys,

I've been set my first 21 mark essay on Marxist/Socialist theory on crime and deviance. I just need some guidance in general about the structure for the essay, I know I have to write it in 30 minutes. Does this mean I have to quickly skim over AO1 briefly and focus mainly on the AO2?

Also if you guys know where I can find some A/A* answers so that I can look at what contents I need to include.

Thank you.x:smile:


Do you have an item with the question? You usually get one with a 21 marker. I have done quite a few essays so I might be able to find one and send you a writing frame. I am pretty sure I have done a marxist one... What was the full question?
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Original post by RandomPeopleDancin
Just searched around my folder and can't find the essay as of yet but I have found a general markscheme for essays. I'll type it up and attach it to this post when I'm done :h:

Edit Just attached the markscheme :smile: If you want, I can try to find the essay and send it to you. Hope the markscheme helps though :tongue:


Thanks so much your a star!:redface:
Original post by DIL$-SOL
Thanks so much your a star!:redface:


No problem :biggrin:
Reply 4
Original post by RandomPeopleDancin
Just searched around my folder and can't find the essay as of yet but I have found a general markscheme for essays. I'll type it up and attach it to this post when I'm done :h:

Edit Just attached the markscheme :smile: If you want, I can try to find the essay and send it to you. Hope the markscheme helps though :tongue:


Hello! Do you have any a/a* grade essays? (: my teacher is rubbish :c Thanks! :3 I want to see an example essay to help me structure mine ^.^
Reply 5
Original post by Wizkidani
Hello! Do you have any a/a* grade essays? (: my teacher is rubbish :c Thanks! :3 I want to see an example essay to help me structure mine ^.^


Which essays 21 markers or 33 markers? I have 2 A-Grade 21 mark answers on Marxist and Transgressive criminology.

I got an A overall in Sociology A-Level.
Original post by Wizkidani
Hello! Do you have any a/a* grade essays? (: my teacher is rubbish :c Thanks! :3 I want to see an example essay to help me structure mine ^.^


Hi,
unfortunately I only have an essay on suicide- all of my other essays and sociology stuff were deleted once I started uni :/ It was a 21/21 essay in case you need to know
http://getrevising.co.uk/resources/aqa_a2_suicide_essay
Reply 7
Original post by DIL$-SOL
Which essays 21 markers or 33 markers? I have 2 A-Grade 21 mark answers on Marxist and Transgressive criminology.

I got an A overall in Sociology A-Level.


21 & 33 markers would be useful! I'm just so confused :c Wow that's good :') I got an A at AS and but I'm just so confused with A2 structure :/
Reply 8
Original post by RandomPeopleDancin
Hi,
unfortunately I only have an essay on suicide- all of my other essays and sociology stuff were deleted once I started uni :/ It was a 21/21 essay in case you need to know
http://getrevising.co.uk/resources/aqa_a2_suicide_essay


Thankyou this is great. Wow ^.^

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