(Original post by ShowerMan)
when you view the mobile site how does it show for you?
and what are you viewing on?
I'm not, but you are aware Flash doesn't work on any apple devices, so iPhones or iPads, which make up a huge part of the smartphone/mobile browsing market.
Regardless, you should'nt have Flash on a mobile site at all. Mobile sites need to be designed for speed and functionality, not fancy like on a computer. And looking at your mobile site now, it's not optimised for mobile browsing at all. It's not responsive and it doesn't look any different to the main site really.
Flash is dying and splash screens like yours are considered pretty old-fashioned and tacky.
Hi Ashley, I appreciate that you want to get feedback for your website however I suggest that you participate to the community and give feedback to other peoples websites first, otherwise it does look good on you.
Looks clean, Facebook and RSS links don't work though. Are you really going to do 3 pages for £20, and pay when happy? Three pages should take ~1 hr, + domains + time to do initial template, is it really worth your time?
Inline styling, dodgy background images and clip-art (those circles?), images where there should be text... Your layout isn't too bad but I think you need to work on your basic webdesign principles before you start looking to get paid to do this.