I go to Greenhead college in Huddersfield, you?
I too did the Conservative 45 mark essay.
I first said the New Right supports it and the reasons why but made a little mini conclusion that the Conservative New Right support it to a lesser extent and used gambling as an example.
Then I said Traditional and One Nation Conservatives don't support it and the reasons why.
Then I made a few comparisons between the New Right and what implications it leads to (I also did this in my other paragraphs) such as their views on property and how it links to the free market.
As you can tell my essay structure was pretty poor.
What did you put?