Could someone mark my introduction so far for a formal broadsheet newspaper article? And tell me how I could improve and add high level punctuation or connectives. The topic is dangerous dogs.
My headline is: Bark not bite: Dangerous Dogs Act in the limelight as attacks upsurge.
Unnecessary, dog attacks are on the rise. For instance, the number of virtuous victims taken to hospital due to dog bites has almost doubled within a decade, new figures have proven. According to hospital statistics, the number of dog bites reported at A&E departments within the United Kingdom has increased by 95 percent over the past decade and reached 7,254 within the last year.