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Is this punctuated properly

Although business may have a variety of services, it's up to them to get the right services; services that suit the consumers needs.

Tell me if I punctuated correctly, if not then state why. Thanks :smile:
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Looks perfectly fine to me. Alternative could probably be "services: services that..." (Having a colon rather than a semi colon) :smile:


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Although business may have a variety of services, it's up to them to get the right services; services that suit the consumer's needs.

Nearly perfect. You just needed an apostrophe in the noun 'consumer'.

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