Personal Statement Re-phrasing
Hi,
I have written my personal statement, but when going through it I have found that I keep using the same phrases all the time, so I need some help re-phrasing.
How would you rephrase the following:
Thanks,
I have written my personal statement, but when going through it I have found that I keep using the same phrases all the time, so I need some help re-phrasing.
How would you rephrase the following:
1.
one of the things I love about....
2.
this is shown by....
3.
I believe/think that....
4.
which is why I believe/think....
Thanks,
Have you tried just removing these phrases? They sound like mainly filler that doesn't actually add anything useful.
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