Skills in my Alevels Listing HELP ???????

Hey so obviously I'm not going to post the paragraph from my personal statement in here so ill have to do my best to describe how it goes...

Basically I've talked about the subjects am studying triple science and maths and have said what skills i have taken from them, i've put sentences in them such as one line: maths has taught me blablabla and, physics has taught me blablabla.
Can anyone possibly help with me with this ? My sister said it sounds a bit like i've listed it and she isn't so good at writting so I look to you guys for help !

Hey so obviously I'm not going to post the paragraph from my personal statement in here so ill have to do my best to describe how it goes...

Basically I've talked about the subjects am studying triple science and maths and have said what skills i have taken from them, i've put sentences in them such as one line: maths has taught me blablabla and, physics has taught me blablabla.
Can anyone possibly help with me with this ? My sister said it sounds a bit like i've listed it and she isn't so good at writting so I look to you guys for help !

maths has taught me blablabla and, physics has taught me blablabla.

Scrap the whole thing. Your A levels, most of the subjects of which you are dropping anyway, are of no interest to admissions tutors. They know that everybody who studies A levels learns the same things from them and just reiterating what these are doesn't make you in any way unique. Focus on the subject you want to study at university and why you want to.

the vast majority of my PS was about the subjects I'd taken, what skills I'd learned from them and how I would use that in my degree course and I got all my offers including UCL...

Sometimes offers are made despite a ps. Sometimes the ps isn't even read. Sometimes strange things happen. However, if you want to put in the best application possible, then the advice I have given is standard from pretty much all universities and ps advisors. It's up to the applicant to take it or leave it.

Strange if that's the advice they give when UCL, Warwick, Southampton, York and Sheffield all accepted my PS for law. I doubt all 5 of those ignored my PS seeing as my GCSE grades weren't really up to scratch for those unis/that course either. It's probably less black and white than just 'unis don't care about your subjects'.