Foreign student - is there anyone willing to check the grammar of my statement please

Hello! i'm applying for civil engineering but i'm kinda stock with the personal statement. I don't want to make any grammar mistake! is there anyone please willing to check the grammar of my statement? thank you in advance!

Please don't send your ps to anyone, nor post it on here, where it will result in it being flagged up by Google as plagiarised.

Give it to your teacher or any teacher.

I'm a gap year student and had nobody to help me with my statement so I gave it to my sister's English teacher.