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Wrote a poem for a muslim girl

I wrote a poem for a girl, let me know what you think. She's very reserved so I think this would be a nice approach.

H
er smile to which darkness bares no place,
U
nder what appears to be the missing half of perfection;
Nothing resembles a subtelty so obscure,
Amidst an array of unmatched complexion.
Your flair, encompassing a whole world of mystery,
Discovering the essence of beauty within this world,
A
girl, whose story, yet untold.

I've never written a poem before and english isn't my strongest of skills so don't be too cruel on me :rolleyes: The first letter of each line spells her name. What do you guys think?

Or is it just sad :K:
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Reply 1
so powerful and touching, post it on Facebook and tag her immediately
Original post by parsyyy
so powerful and touching, post it on Facebook and tag her immediately


Lool, no my friends will think I'm moist. :lol:
Reply 3
Original post by Anonynous
Lool, no my friends will think I'm moist. :lol:


oh okay, stay dry then
Reply 4
give it to her in a letter and tell her to read it after 21:00 to make it more mysterius
Reply 5
please tag her on fb!
Muslim girl?? This should be more to her tastes:


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bIRP84v_Kw
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Original post by Philipekk
give it to her in a letter and tell her to read it after 21:00 to make it more mysterius


:lol: I want to give it to one of her friends to give to her.
Reply 8
But how are you sure that she won't open it and tell her what is it? Well, the more mysterious it will be- the better. She will be more curious with every second so shey would think all the time about you. And the idea with starting letters is so goddamn great.
Reply 9
Or you could just approach her and actually speak to her
That was soo good and touching!


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Original post by Anonynous
Lool, no my friends will think I'm moist. :lol:


Or thirsty... :teehee:

(I had to lol. Good luck w/e you decide to do :tongue:)
Oh my.

I would suggest not to give this to her. Just try talking to her
Haram Haram Haram!

Thats a very unique name btw, good luck with the poem and keep us updated :colone:
Reply 14
Hard poem OP, got me feelin u kno, man was gettin lil bit emotional still
Original post by Anonynous
I wrote a poem for a girl, let me know what you think. She's very reserved so I think this would be a nice approach.

H
er smile to which darkness bares no place,
U
nder what appears to be the missing half of perfection;
Nothing resembles a subtelty so obscure,
Amidst an array of unmatched complexion.
Your flair, encompassing a whole world of mystery,
Discovering the essence of beauty within this world,
A
girl, whose story, yet untold.

I've never written a poem before and english isn't my strongest of skills so don't be too cruel on me :rolleyes: The first letter of each line spells her name. What do you guys think?

Or is it just sad :K:


You don't have to write poetry for her, just confess to her that 'I am actually interested in you,and I would like to marry you, if you accept the other person, it is not certain that he will look after you well,but if you chose me, I'll love you forever. and if you are not interested, I will not force you, your wish, but to me,you're the best in everything'.
Recite Radioheads "Creep" to her instead, guaranteed win
Oh Abdul :rofl:



When you give it to her, you have to make sure you are wearing your best Jubba and grow your beard out, you will look "the bomb"
What a bull**** is that you wrote Gyoshinka? Well the most important question is : how do you know her? Do you speak with her everyday? Do you share common topic? Or you are just a creep who spoken with her few times and gives love poems?
Original post by Anonynous
:lol: I want to give it to one of her friends to give to her.


That's sweet:smile: be a man and give it to her yourself. She'll also appreciate it more

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