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I need help drawing a conclusion from assessing in Essay Writing! Please Help!

Hi,

I am studying Sociology online and I need help drawing conclusions from assessing views.

For example, in this question:

Using materialfrom Item C and elsewhere, assess the materialist explanation ofclass inequalities in health. (20 Marks)

I have compared the working class and the middle class but I don't know how to come to a conclusion?! Do I conclude that the middle class is treated fairly?

Please help!! :frown:

Reply 1

beth16x

The best way to conclude an essay is to summarise what you've written in the essay! Include that in your conclusion, but also talk as briefly about the working class too, without including opinions :smile: