5/6 - When you were talking about the title you didn't identify any language features which is partially my fault cause I didn't tell you about that but idk if the examiner would agree with this but the link you made with the title and the text in the paragraph seemed to be somewhat repetitive of your first link. Lastly, in your first paragraph about the image you didn't use a quote when linking it to the text

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zact

Thank you, how do you do answer question 3

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saahil0987

Original post by zact

Thank you, how do you do answer question 3

Same as q1, so inferences but it's usually about thoughts and feeling so do that instead of saying 'what you learn from the text' Be sure to cover both thoughts and feelings

Simple breakdown:
-4 paragraphs
-2 marks per paragraph (Point - feeling / thought, Evidence - quote, Explain = Inference)
-To get 8/8 cover both thoughts and feelings

Reply 28

zact

http://filestore.aqa.org.uk/subjects/AQA-ENG1H-INS-JAN13.PDF

Could you please mark it and tell me where i have gone wrong

thank you

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saahil0987

Original post by zact

http://filestore.aqa.org.uk/subjects/AQA-ENG1H-INS-JAN13.PDF

Could you please mark it and tell me where i have gone wrong

thank you

6 - Not all the points were developed into an inference and you only talked about the thoughts

Reply 30

zact

Original post by saahil0987

6 - Not all the points were developed into an inference and you only talked about the thoughts

Could you please mark this:

This is the link:http://filestore.aqa.org.uk/subjects/AQA-ENG1H-INS-JUN12.PDF
The answer is question 1

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saahil0987

Original post by zact

Could you please mark this:

This is the link:http://filestore.aqa.org.uk/subjects/AQA-ENG1H-INS-JUN12.PDF
The answer is question 1

7 out of 8
- Good use of quotes
- Valid Inferences made

x Third paragraph was slightly more akin to paraphrasing rather than inference

Reply 32

zact

Original post by saahil0987

7 out of 8
- Good use of quotes
- Valid Inferences made

x Third paragraph was slightly more akin to paraphrasing rather than inference

Could you also please mark this one it is question 2 on the same link i sent before:

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