Hey everyone, I had two essays marked by my teacher and I'm going to post them as two separate posts. While I wasn't given a specific mark, I was told that they were definitely in mark band 5 (ranging from 38-45 marks), so hopefully it'll help for your essays. I should warn you that most of my historiography is made-up, although there are some that are real. My teacher says that they flow so well though, that they shouldn't cause a real problem, and the Historians that I have used are all appropriate. Some areas may look a little thin on the ground, but remember that this is typed, whereas the hand-written essay looks much longer and more detailed, and yes - before you ask, this was done in timed conditions, where I spent exactly 45 minutes on my response.
'Anglo-Spanish relations deteriorated in the years 1568 to 1588 largely as a result of the actions of the English.'
Assess the validity of this view.
There were a number of factors that caused a deterioration in Anglo-Spanish relations - chief among them, the actions of the English. This includes the 1568 Genoese Loan debacle, combined with British privateering, particularly with regard to the 1568 Battle of San Juan de Ulloa, and the expulsion of the Spanish ambassador in 1584. Historian Susan Doran goes to far as to suggest that Elizabeth's foreign policy decisions 'alienated' the Spanish - an argument that I agree with,
On the one hand, for example, British privateering was crucial to asserting Elizabeth's authority in expanding her rule over territory in the New World and boosting trade imports and exports, which brought her into conflict with Spanish interests. The 1562 expedition of Sir John Hawkins to the West Indies was the beginning of this, as he laid claim to new territory in the name of Elizabeth, furthered by the Sir Francis Drake's later stealing of Spanish silver in 1572 and the 1568 Battle of San Juan de Ulloa, in which Hawkins stole slaves from the Spanish. Wilson believes this was a 'bold and risky move', pointing to the fact that it antagonised King Philip II of Spain. McCaffrey, however, disagrees, suggesting that it was a 'natural course of action', which was regularly undertaken by both English and Spanish privateers who were acting in their own interests, and not on behalf of their ruler. I believe that McCaffrey's viewpoint is the most convincing, as Philip was clearly irritated by these actions - evident from his subsequent actions against Elizabeth by supporting Catholic plots to overthrow her.
The Genoese Loan of 1568 was crucial also, as Philip relied upon it in order to pay the Duke of Alva and his troops the 400,000 florins that he owed them, which was necessary to continue his military campaign in the Netherlands. Elizabeth, however, in a move described by John Guy as 'unprecedented and dangerous', seized the loan on the advice of her Secretary of State, Sir William Cecil, which furthered her foreign policy in ensuring that the Netherlands remained autonomous. This greatly antagonised Philip, causing his later bankruptcy in 1575, which facilitated the massacre of innocent Protestants in Antwerp by unpaid Spanish soldiers in 1576.
The expulsion of the Spanish ambassador in 1584 was a move by Elizabeth that Haigh argues was 'controversial' as it distanced her from the Spanish, although Pollard disagrees, suggesting that it was 'a necessary measure' following Spanish involvement in the Throckmorton plot of 1583. I agree with Pollard, as the danger posed by Spain was very real, but this greatly antagonised Philip, evidenced by his sending of the Spanish Armada in 1585.
On the other hand, however, the deterioration in Anglo-Spanish relations can be primarily attributed to the actions of Spain. For example, their aggressive treatment of Dutch Protestants who rebelled in 1566 by sending a Spanish army to engage in military action in 1567 was a move that Wernham argues 'gave Elizabeth no choice but to intervene', thus causing the deterioration of Anglo-Spanish relations, especially with her signing of the Treaty of Nonsuch in 1585 against Spain, in which she openly declared support for the Dutch rebels.
Also, the involvement of Philip II in assisting Mary Queen of Scots in the respective Catholic plots of 1571 (Ridolfi), 1583 (Throckmorton) and 1586 (Babington) 'were intended to dramatically undermine Elizabeth's authority on the international stage', according to Doran. Jones disagrees with Doran, however, instead suggesting that Philip was simply seeking to 'further the spread of Catholicism in Europe to serve his own interests'. I agree with Doran, as although his support for Mary would further the spread of Catholicism, it would antagonise and undermine Elizabeth far more, which would serve as revenge for losses incurred from the 1568 Battle of San Juan de Ulloa and the Genoese Loan of the same year.
Finally, the 1585 seizure of English ships in the Atlantic by Spain can be viewed as a direct contributor to the deterioration of Anglo-Spanish relations, as Philip cleared the way for his Armada to be sent, which would result in open conflict in 1588. This was 'premeditated revenge' according to MacCullough, although Duffy disagrees, suggesting instead that it was simply a 'direct response' to the expulsion of the Spanish ambassador in 1584. I agree with MacCullough, as this was clearly a culmination in the deterioration of Anglo-Spanish relations, as evidenced by the previous quarrels between England and Spain in prior years.
In conclusion, I find the views of Doran, Wilson and Guy to be the most convincing, as events caused by the English clearly repudiated Philip's authority and policy, leading to the events that Philip instigated, such as support for Mary Queen of Scots, culminating in full-scale war in 1588.
Teacher comments:
- Try to include a contrasting argument from another Historian in the introduction.
- Could have also mentioned the 1584 Treaty of Joinville
- Conclusion is very brief , clearly due to time constraints, although the rest of the essay makes up for this - could be expanded upon by mentioning alternative arguments.
- Historiography flows very well - even though some are made-up, this does not seem at all obvious - Historians used are appropriate.
- Solid structure and content - very detailed with good use of dates and names of specific events/people.
AWARDED LEVEL 5 (38-45 marks)