If you want a bit of constructive criticism, I'd turn up the instruments up or the vocals down, just because it's difficult to hear the music too clearly.
Also at around 0:48 and again at 1:36 it seems to go silent for a split second, I dunno if that was intended but you might want to try and fill that somehow.
Otherwise it's not really my style of music but I can recognise you have a good voice, and lyrically it seems solid.
If you want a bit of constructive criticism, I'd turn up the instruments up or the vocals down, just because it's difficult to hear the music too clearly.
Also at around 0:48 and again at 1:36 it seems to go silent for a split second, I dunno if that was intended but you might want to try and fill that somehow.
Otherwise it's not really my style of music but I can recognise you have a good voice, and lyrically it seems solid.
I've tried to turn up the instruments and the other way but when I save the song, it's the same. No idea why.